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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2007 11:03 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

"an appetizer that has something to do with eleven Lords a-leaping" - um... hot dogs? ;)


Author's Response: HA! Nice one. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28, 2007 10:36 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Perfect Darryl voice. Really great to read Darryl done so well. Nice!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That was my first attempt at Darryl, I think. He was fun, and a little easier than I expected, because I know guys like that, you know? I am glad you're liking it so far!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27, 2007 08:39 am Title: Four calling salesmen

Hee!  Love the little bit you added on at the end there.  I'm excited that you finished this thing and I haven't even gotten to start yet.  Yay for lis-fic for me!

Author's Response: Like a belated Christmas present! I forgot that I added that after you read the first draft. I thought it ended on too much of a down-beat, and if Kelly was going to come in guns a-blazin', it might as well be a tiny cliff-hanger. Glad you're finally getting a chance to read it!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 08:14 am Title: Four calling salesmen

horning in on my territory?  Hardly!  I was already stepping on toes.... ;-) Now get back to writing.  :-D

Author's Response: Ha! Yes, ma'am. In fact, I'm proof-reading chapter two right now.

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Great premise, nqllisi!! Can't wait for more!! -CH

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I know where it's ending up, but I'm not sure exactly how to get there. Hope it works! Heh. Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Hee!  Jealous Kelly.  And I loved Pam's TH about Angela being miserable in a different way than normal. I can hear her now.  But only in my mind (well, in your mind actually) thanks to the damn strike.  *pout*

Looking forward to more! 



Author's Response: Seriously, stupid strike. Grrr. But just think of the poor souls who haven't discovered fic to ease the pain? Tragic.  Thank you for commenting- hope you like the rest!!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Always great to see a new story from you!  This is really fun and a great theme to play with.  Love the voices in this and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I think I'm in the Christmas spirit! It is a fun theme to play with- and I love these characters so much. More to come!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Another great Christmas ensemble story. Can't wait for more!  And the earrings are gorgeous. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I liked them too (a bit pricey for me, maybe, but Darryl's got it going on)! Thank you- I'll get more up today. Hope you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 05:04 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

oooo, I am very interested to see what in the world is going on with Angela!  One small criticsm ... isn't it TEN lords a leaping? ;)



Author's Response: Ooooops. Yes, and I even had the lyrics open beside me...I think I'll leave it. It's Pam's mistake, not mine, see? Heeee. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

I love happy, fluffy Christmas-inspired Jim and Pam stories!  And I love when a  story has a link to show us something that was mentioned. And I love everything you write, so this story is win-win-WIN for me!



Author's Response: Awww, you're so great </Jim>.  Seriously, thank you! I hope you like where I go with it (hint: fluffville).

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

So glad  to see a longer story from you!!  (and in case you never noticed, I have a particular soft spot for the 12 days of christmas.)  ;-)

Author's Response: Yes, in fact I knew that. But I didn't think you'd mind if I horned in a little bit on your territory! :)  Thanks for commenting- more soon! It's fun to write ensemble again, it's been a while.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 08:12 am Title: Four calling salesmen

many things to say: i love happychristmas fic, especially jim pam interaction (and i also have to say those little touches would makeme be squealing with joy if we.... ya know.... had new episodes)

those earrings are more than i am spending on christmas presents TOTAL! like.... three times as much! holy crap!

theres more right? tell me there's more... i demand more. like, yesterday. stat. stat means now. (pretty please? with a cherry on top?) 



Author's Response: There will be three more chapters. I can't promise "stat"- but definitely before Christmas!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 06:25 am Title: Four calling salesmen

Sounds interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll get the next chapter up ASAP- probably tomorrow.

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