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Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 22, 2007 12:00 pm Title: Three French breads

Love, love, love this!


Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm having a great time writing it.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Three French breads

Three french breads???  LOVE THAT!  So great (and so Kevin).  Really love the Kelly/Pam exchange and always enjoy the Angela/Pam dynamic.  So fun!  Looking forward to the rest of the journey.

Author's Response: Thank you so much- and thanks again for the rec. I'm having fun playing in DM-land again. Jim and Pam will always be my favorites, but the others are so fun because you can make one or the other of them say absolutely anything. Nothing is out of bounds for at least one of these nutjobs!  I'm glad you're enjoying this- thanks again!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 06:11 pm Title: Three French breads

Oh, I can't wait to see Pam's reaction when she finds her present in Jim's coat pocket!

Author's Response: Hey, now, no jumping ahead! Hee. Yes, fluffiness awaits. I hope it lives up to your expectations. Thank you!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Three French breads

Such a great premise here so far, lis! I love that you--among other authors--are exploring so many of the other characters these days! I mean, sure, we all love Jim & Pam, but c'mon! How much fun is it to write for Kelly? (answer: a LOT) 

I especially like the voice you've given Darryl here. He's one of my favorite "minor" characters, and if you think about it, one of the few voices of sanity other than Jim & Pam in the entire office. I really liked the scene between Darryl & Pam, and of course how jealous Kelly got. :)

I look forward to more! 



Author's Response: I enjoy the ensemble stuff, I just find it much harder to write! I'm glad it's coming across OK. Yes, Kelly is a hoot. I also like writing for Creed, in small doses (we'll see him in chapter 3). Darryl is fun because I know guys like that. It makes him easier to write for than I expected. Thank you for the specific comments, as usual!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Three French breads

Ohhh fun!!!! I really like this, and I've been waiting for a fic to introduce Angela Kinsey's real pregnancy into the storyline. Can't wait for more!!  --CH

Author's Response: I have babies on the brain (and, um, in the womb) these days, so I'm not surprised this happened. Hee. Thank you so much- I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 01:43 pm Title: Three French breads

fremmch bread is yummy. and sorry if this is weird. i am litterally typing with one of my arms below my leg and i am quite twisted about. however, if i want to be comfortable, i have to clean and unpack, and i choose to do not tat

Eeek! Well, I think Angela Andy baby is less scary tan Dwangela baby, but even though Dawngela spawn may infact signal the end of the world, thats what I want. None of those Andy Angela crap!

YEAH, "pam had actually left he building" i totally heard "and elvis has left the busiding" in my head

i have an idea about what pam's present is and i like it.

and i guess you are goin to have to say i have to wait until tomorrow or something until the nexr chapter is posted. le sigh.

Author's Response: Sorry, yes. This is all I have written so far! I know what's coming next, if that makes you feel better. Thank you, as usual!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 08:14 am Title: Four calling salesmen

horning in on my territory?  Hardly!  I was already stepping on toes.... ;-) Now get back to writing.  :-D

Author's Response: Ha! Yes, ma'am. In fact, I'm proof-reading chapter two right now.

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Great premise, nqllisi!! Can't wait for more!! -CH

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I know where it's ending up, but I'm not sure exactly how to get there. Hope it works! Heh. Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Hee!  Jealous Kelly.  And I loved Pam's TH about Angela being miserable in a different way than normal. I can hear her now.  But only in my mind (well, in your mind actually) thanks to the damn strike.  *pout*

Looking forward to more! 



Author's Response: Seriously, stupid strike. Grrr. But just think of the poor souls who haven't discovered fic to ease the pain? Tragic.  Thank you for commenting- hope you like the rest!!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Always great to see a new story from you!  This is really fun and a great theme to play with.  Love the voices in this and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I think I'm in the Christmas spirit! It is a fun theme to play with- and I love these characters so much. More to come!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

Another great Christmas ensemble story. Can't wait for more!  And the earrings are gorgeous. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I liked them too (a bit pricey for me, maybe, but Darryl's got it going on)! Thank you- I'll get more up today. Hope you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 05:04 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

oooo, I am very interested to see what in the world is going on with Angela!  One small criticsm ... isn't it TEN lords a leaping? ;)



Author's Response: Ooooops. Yes, and I even had the lyrics open beside me...I think I'll leave it. It's Pam's mistake, not mine, see? Heeee. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

I love happy, fluffy Christmas-inspired Jim and Pam stories!  And I love when a  story has a link to show us something that was mentioned. And I love everything you write, so this story is win-win-WIN for me!



Author's Response: Awww, you're so great </Jim>.  Seriously, thank you! I hope you like where I go with it (hint: fluffville).

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Four calling salesmen

So glad  to see a longer story from you!!  (and in case you never noticed, I have a particular soft spot for the 12 days of christmas.)  ;-)

Author's Response: Yes, in fact I knew that. But I didn't think you'd mind if I horned in a little bit on your territory! :)  Thanks for commenting- more soon! It's fun to write ensemble again, it's been a while.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 08:12 am Title: Four calling salesmen

many things to say: i love happychristmas fic, especially jim pam interaction (and i also have to say those little touches would makeme be squealing with joy if we.... ya know.... had new episodes)

those earrings are more than i am spending on christmas presents TOTAL! like.... three times as much! holy crap!

theres more right? tell me there's more... i demand more. like, yesterday. stat. stat means now. (pretty please? with a cherry on top?) 



Author's Response: There will be three more chapters. I can't promise "stat"- but definitely before Christmas!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2007 06:25 am Title: Four calling salesmen

Sounds interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll get the next chapter up ASAP- probably tomorrow.

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