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Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2008 08:56 am Title: The Girls

So melancholy but very lovely.  I especially liked the one for Phyllis.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2008 09:47 am Title: The Girls

Sad, but good. :)  I particularly felt Phyllis's section. 


Author's Response: Thanks! I like there's a lot more to Phyllis than we see on screen.

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2008 08:18 am Title: The Girls

Heh... okay, this wasn't anything close to what I was expecting. Not that that's a bad thing at all. Unexpected stories are some of my favorites. 

I find your take on many of these scenarios quite fascinating. I chuckled with pure schadenfreude over Jan's coupon clipping and hot-pocket munching; I loved Kelly's manic mood swings; and I felt my eyes go wide with surprise upon reading about Phyllis' troubled past. Very brave moves all, bebitched, and I applaud the courage to explore those.

Pam's tears always make me a little verklempt myself, as that was the moment that started me writing fic in the first place. I really like your painful take on that moment.

I think the only one that had me confused was the very first one with Karen and Andy. It says pre-merger, but Karen talks about having already moved to the middle of nowhere, which makes it sound like it's post-merger. I guess I'm just a little confused by that one.

Overall, though, a great and intriguing story! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I guess what I meant was post-her moving but pre-The Merger, as in the episode. Sorry for the confusion!

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