Date: February 19, 2008 07:38 pm Title: So I let you go
Super-angsty and complex! I'm so glad it didn't go this way, but if Pam had married Roy, I could certainly see these sorts of emotions in both of them.
I found especially compelling the part about Pam realizing she was ruining her marriage, and how Roy had been trying.
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 03:22 pm Title: So I let you go
She knew she had to let him go.
--No, she doesn't. Let's not make this the theme of the story. Instead...
Yet he had a feeling if tomorrow, she woke up in his arms, he wouldn’t regret a day of all it took to get her there.
...let's make THAT the theme of the story!
I'm really enjoying this, Petty. Post your chapters as fast as you please--I'm lovin' every word. I'm not usually one to cheer on the dissolution of marriages, but in this case, I'm hoping Pam dumps dear Roy before they even eat their Thanksgiving turkey.
Can't wait for more! -CH
Author's Response: That is still the theme of the story! Don't you worry ;)
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 03:05 pm Title: So I let you go
ohhh... I love where this is going. I think you're a fantastic writer.. everyone's surprisingly in character.
I can't wait till the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! Writing in character is the hardest for me, so unless I'm writing for Kelly, I try to keep it simple. Cause I could do Kelly alllll day long. (TWSS but I'm a girl so that's weird)
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 01:02 pm Title: So I let you go
Petty, such a GREAT chapter! Loved it, especially the banter between Mark and Jim. Loved this line: "She was a perfectly maddening blend of free spirit and Stepford wife." You really nailed it!
Date: February 18, 2008 12:35 pm Title: So I let you go
HURRY!!! Love it! Great job!