Date: February 19, 2008 07:46 pm Title: and I watch you leave
The end of this especially is heartbreaking, but really good.
My nitpick is that it's cold out and no one mulches in the winter. At least I don't think anyone mulches in the winter. True confession -- I don't really know that much about mulching, but it seems no one would do it at Thanksgiving.
Author's Response: Ha. I fixed that part, since I don't know either. I'm a Texas girl. It smells like mulch at every playground I've ever been to! I didn't even think that it might not up north.
Date: February 19, 2008 10:00 am Title: and I watch you leave
Excellent!
Author's Response: I appreciate that, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 09:24 am Title: and I watch you leave
This was amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate you saying so
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 08:39 am Title: and I watch you leave
Oh my god, SO true to character. This was so intense, I just wanted to cry. I can see how it would be hard to write, but you did such a fine job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that. I'm glad it was realistic enough
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 08:15 am Title: and I watch you leave
Petty--Guh. I'm loving this. The imagery of that final scene was lovely, and I could hear all of the words. Yours is one of those stories that puts me in an awkward situation: I like Roy, and he doesn't deserve what I think is inevitably going to happen with his wife, but at the same time, you've made curlicues of my morals by making me cheer on the dissolution of their marriage. I'm rooting for Jim and Pam, of course, but I'm interested to see where you'll take this and what roads will take you there. You're doing a wonderful job with this story, and I'm savoring every chapter!
Till next time.... ---CH
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it!