Date: February 24, 2008 07:20 am Title: When you walk away
first of all - i am loving this!! such an interesting take - and v. angsty. can't wait to continue reading.
however, i'd be remiss if i didn't mention that 'hermaphrodite' is a problematic term. i know it was a joke, and not meant to be offensive, but it's a complicated, loaded word. for more info: http://www.glaad.org/media/guide/transfocus.php
thanks for writing - hope you don't mind my comment.
Date: February 20, 2008 06:59 pm Title: When you walk away
“You’d follow me to Scranton for nothing more than a chance?” I can totally believe she'd say this and then turn it into the "I moved from Connecticut" from Traveling Salesman.
And yeah, she's still in the picture. ;)
Interesting conversation with Jan. I like it -- he's got little choice but Scranton or quitting D.M.
Date: February 20, 2008 04:03 pm Title: When you walk away
I won't throw things, but the fact that Karen's tagging along like a doormat gives me cause to keep my projectiles close at hand. We'll decide for sure after the next chapter.
Keep up the great work! -CH
Date: February 20, 2008 01:44 pm Title: When you walk away
Guh. You're killing me. Excellent update. I love the dialog between Jim and his mom. Such a spunky woman : ) I will refrain from throwing things at this time since I sense a glimmer of hope. *bites nails*