10 [Report This]Date: February 29, 2008 01:11 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
I'm really enjoying your series. I like how real Pam is, and how you are handling the whole seperation from Roy. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 28, 2008 06:07 pm Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
Ooh, Pam's revenge was good. ;) And I love that the difference in Pam's relationship status has caused them to interact in such a way that Karen's picking up on their vibe so much sooner than she did on the show. It gives me hope that they'll find it in them to be completely honest about their feelings a lot sooner too.
Date: February 28, 2008 11:31 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
so good...i am glad that karen noticed, but i don't want her in the picture (i want me some jam)...can't wait for more!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 09:00 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
Love. This. Story. I thought you did a fine job with the two recent chapters. You really wove the story well. Everything is just so believable.
9 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 08:30 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
Petty--Hoorah for a new chapter from you! I was just about to settle in and start studying for an exam, but I saw the update and decided Aristotle could wait. What a wonderful installment! I love the tension you've been building with each new chapter, but I'm starting to wonder now how you're going to wrap this up when the time comes. It's interesting that Jim is still with Karen even though gooey-fun pre-CN Jam flirtations are back in full swing. You've got me on the edge of my seat here, and I was pulled in from the first few words of the chapter. I will say, nay, declare, that I bristled when Karen tried on a southern accent; as a Tennesseean, I almost felt my stomach turn when I imagined her using our drawl, and then to add insult to injury, you made her love "Gone with the Wind!" That's my all time favorite movie, but I tell you what, Petty, thinking Karen loved it almost ruined the 21 years I've loved it. Haha--But no worries, because before I could register my upset you start adding on the angst and drama with that wonderful break room scene. I love the way you explored three of the corners to the love-parallelogram you've established in this story, and I continue to be on the edge of my seat waiting for more. Keep it up, my friend! --CH
Date: February 28, 2008 08:15 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
I, for one, love dialouge so THANK YOU! very good touche' for Pam as well.