8 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2008 07:36 am Title: Evening the Score
dear god i love this series! i am going to start thinking of conversations so this goes on forever... my new goal and life is to sidetrack you.
Author's Response: Haha..thanks! You could start by keeping those smutty one-shots like "...In Bed" coming. SO GOOD. Or, wait, that's probably not the kind of distraction you were talking about.
Date: January 25, 2008 11:46 am Title: Evening the Score
I think this is a good story. I've really enjoyed it. Keep writing!
10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2008 10:04 am Title: Employee of the Week
Gah, this was so so great. I'm really enjoying this story, Jim and Pam are perfectly in character and the premise is just great. Please update soon!
Date: January 25, 2008 06:09 am Title: Evening the Score
That was perfect for Pam becasue she did have that look in her eyes when she was watching Jim run on the court.
10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2008 06:07 am Title: Evening the Score
This is really good so far. I loved the part with Pam and drunk!Jim hanging out in the conference room.
Date: January 25, 2008 03:12 am Title: Employee of the Week
Wow, I'm really loving this! I'm a little bit obsessed with the thought of Jim and Pam rehashing all their befores now that they're together. It's an interesting concept, and one you've done an amazing job with! And I love the image of Jim slipping her notes a la middle school to ask her when she knew she wanted him...definitely not middle school. Or at least it wasn't in my day. Anyway, this is great, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Author's Response: Thank you! Your review is motivating me. :)
Date: January 24, 2008 08:25 pm Title: Self-Control
This was so great. It played out perfectly with the characters as we know them.
8 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2008 11:06 pm Title: Self-Control
"Whose idea was it to put the receptionist right up front where she can’t miss a thing, anyway? If he ran the office, the reception desk would be…he doesn’t know where. But the receptionist would be single."
I love that even when drunk Jim knew what he wanted. Great job with this!
8 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2008 11:01 pm Title: Employee of the Week
"Actually, initially the awe had been directed pretty much exclusively to the sight of Pam removing her bra, but about forty-five minutes later, he’d come to his senses enough to notice his surroundings."
Totally awesome line!
Author's Response: Thanks. He is a guy, after all, so I thought he should have his priorities...
10 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2008 06:39 am Title: Self-Control
i am over the moon about this!! what wonderful pieces of writing. what i especially love is that you created one of the greatest pieces of smut - while they kept their hands to themselves and their clothes on. who knew that was possible? more. please :)
Date: January 12, 2008 04:22 am Title: Self-Control
Wow. This is just fabulous writing, so real, so well done. You know, I love that feeling when I'm reading something and you get that first tingle about how good it is and with this chapter, I pretty much tingled all the way till the end. Such great dialogue and the description of Jim looking at her in the conference room was very hot - exceeded only by the perfection of drunk!Jim. How did you do that? I hope Pam answers that question really soon!
Date: January 12, 2008 04:11 am Title: Employee of the Week
Oh, I love your description of Pam's room and why Jim loves being there! I think that's exactly how he would feel, just reveling in the intimacy of being in her personal and private space. Lovely. Also, loved their conversation in bed and now I'm itching to click "next" so....
Author's Response: Thanks! I realized that I have a minor obsession with Pam's apartment... I think maybe it has something to do with the fact that my landlord won't let me paint mine.
10 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2008 01:05 am Title: Self-Control
This is great! Equally sweet and funny, and all the characters just feel right. Looking forward to Pam's answer.
9 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2008 09:28 pm Title: Self-Control
That was such a fun read! I can picture drunk, zoned-out Jim fantasizing about Pam : )
Date: January 11, 2008 09:00 pm Title: Self-Control
Ooh, this is so much fun! Love how Jim feels different in Pam's place. Damn, do I feel ripped off that we don't get to see who Jim was going to 'evolve' into next. *pout*
Looking forward to more ;o)
Date: January 11, 2008 07:43 pm Title: Self-Control
This is so much fun! I feel like I'm eavesdropping.
More please!
Date: January 11, 2008 05:40 pm Title: Employee of the Week
Trully enjoying this so far. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks... I'm working on it!
Date: January 11, 2008 04:51 pm Title: Self-Control
This is great! Loking forward to the next chapter. Hope it's up soon!
7 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2008 04:47 pm Title: Self-Control
Good stuff. I can't stop giggling thinking about Jim worrying he's creepy!
10 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2008 04:20 pm Title: Employee of the Week
Great start! I can't wait to see where you go with this. I like the idea of them telling eachother when they thought the other one wanted them. Very cute! More soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you!