9 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2008 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like the way you write Pam. Instances where she feels guilty, but maybe for the wrong things, I really think that's in character for her. With Roy though, I'm not sure I agree entirely that he'd try to control her interaction with jim so entirely (ok, so maybe in the heat of anger I can) because I think at heart he's an ok guy, but I like this Roy too. Angry Roy is lots of fun. He certainly is more of a schmuk though than he would have been if he'd told her if he caught her with jim today he'd leave her. So ... Go Angry Roy.
I love Dwight's involvement too. He's so much fun. It's been a really immersing read so far. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I have the same issue with Roy that I do with Karen, I can't hate them because they are decent people, but they are in the way. I find it extremely difficult to write him. Thanks for reading!!
Date: February 20, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Heehee! This is such a cute start! Aww waking up all snuggled. =)
Author's Response: I had meant this to be fluffy and fun like the first chapter, but angst just seems to follow Jim and Pam.
Date: February 20, 2008 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great fic you have, here! I really love all the tension and angst and can't wait to see what's coming up next. Please update soon! :)
Author's Response: I try to update once a week-ish. Thanks for reading!
Date: February 13, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG awesome update!!! I got chills with the line that went something like "he knew he was going to kiss her tonight"... Beautiful!
I hope you update again soon, I'm dying here ;) !!!
Author's Response: I have to come up with a topic for my policy paper and then I can work on chapter 5. I do have the Roy/Pam interactions outlined and if I don't have angst checked as a category I will have to add it after the next chapter. rnrnAnd I am glad you liked that line. It was one of my favorites too!
Date: January 30, 2008 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
omggg!!! please update very very soon! i love this story so much! :]]]]
Author's Response: I actually had to split this chapter into two parts so I am almost finished with chapter 4 :)
7 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2008 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first story here! Great beginning, I'm anxious to see what happens next...
Author's Response: Thank you! I have already learned something important. No watching Top Model while responding to reviews. It is impossible to make coherent sentences (see below). I hope you like the next chapter.
Date: January 19, 2008 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhhh cool story!! I'm so excited for you to continue this one :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! I hope I can do my ideas continue to excite you.
Date: January 19, 2008 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd love to beta for this lovely story :).
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the offer! I just sent you chapter 2 :)
Date: January 19, 2008 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I'm kinda really likin' this AU The Injury :). That story doesn't get treated in fic very often; nice idea!
Author's Response: Thanks! It really doesn't have a lot to do with the episode itself. It really just gave me the setup I needed for this story.