1 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2018 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
I wish this had a next chapter. I quite enjoy following their puzzle of the night before.
Date: December 18, 2014 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Come on!! You stopped!?! You stopped there?!? WHY!!!!!!!
Date: January 28, 2011 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
Any chance of you continuing this? :)
Date: February 21, 2008 09:07 am Title: Chapter 5
P.S. This cracked me up: “Are you telling me you made it to the Pam Pong finals?” Dwight was giddy with excitement. He couldn’t wait to tell Angela; she might even show some flicker of emotion. Too funny : )
Author's Response: This was my favorite line of the chapter. I am so glad someone else enjoyed it!
9 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2008 08:38 am Title: Chapter 5
I just read this from the beginning since my recollection was a little foggy (just like Jim and Pam's, right?). Nice job! I like how you handled the confrontation between Pam and Roy. Looking forward to reading more and finding the underwear...
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope I don't disappoint with the underwear reveal. It is such a big part of the story.
Date: February 20, 2008 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really liked this chapter, and I did like the way you wrote Roy. At first, I was felt bad because Pam was just blatantly lying to him and he seemed to believe it...but then he knew the whole time!! That's definitely more like Roy...especially the comment about what he would do if he saw her with Jim again. Eeep!! Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing all the chapters thus far. You're great for doing that. Roy is so difficult to write. I want him to be the bad guy, but he really isn't. I think I wrote this chapter 4 times before settling on this version. Thanks again for your awesome reviews.
Date: February 20, 2008 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
holy shit! drama to the max! i think you got what roy would have done if pam and jim had done something and he found out. i totally believed it. and i cant wait for more.