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Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2008 02:13 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..

Thank you for this beautiful story.  I loved it!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2008 03:48 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..

"Another day of pretending that his heart didn’t break a little every time he looked at her and was again reminded that he wasn’t with her."

Beautiful line. Congrats on your first story!  You've got me hooked and I'm going to go read more right now..

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:59 am Title: In my haste I left you behind..

great story! please continue.

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Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2008 05:02 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..

Plese don't make us wait too long before your next update.  I am so happy Pam woke up.  BTW the cheesier the better for me!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2008 06:31 am Title: In my haste I left you behind..

Perfect note with the flowers.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 06:37 am Title: In my haste I left you behind..

Just read this one and can't wait for more. Hurry!!!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 09:46 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..

Oooh poor Pam!! Really nice start, looking forward to reading more. =)

Reviewer: Lexiconiful Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 05:17 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..

You did a great job of conveying Jim's emotion. The end really makes you picture his heart stopping in his throat.

Author's Response: Thanks! I loved your story, so your comment means a lot! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: bnbrice Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 04:51 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..

I like where this is heading.. Please continue soon! 

Reviewer: pam_beesly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 04:21 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..

:O MORE PLEASE!!

Reviewer: SafetyOfficer Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 04:11 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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