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Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2008 09:12 am Title: Epilogue

You have written the characters of Pam & Jim to a tee. The paragraph where Jim was talking to himself about being "that kind of guy" - the thoughtful, sensitive guy that he is - was spot on. And Pam's confession of her love for him was heartwarming. This was a sweet story - one that I'm sorry had to come to an end - but I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Keep at it. You're good.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! Another story is in the works!! Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2008 11:52 am Title: Epilogue

Good job!  Really nice ending.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2008 09:34 am Title: Epilogue

so adorable...love that you tied it back to the show...hopefully i can read more your stories in the future...

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