Date: August 25, 2010 06:36 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Loved it. It moved me. Thank you.
Date: February 15, 2008 09:44 am Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Where are you Puffing Noise? I think this was becoming my new favorite story. What happens now?
Date: February 06, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
I've always wondered what Pam did on Jim's last day. Really interesting start, so heartbreaking.
Date: February 06, 2008 05:43 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
I wish this didn't have to end. I really loved it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2008 03:34 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
It's not over is it?
Date: February 05, 2008 01:29 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Huge Police fan and a huge fan of this story! Chapter 4 is fantastic!
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Date: February 04, 2008 04:37 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
So good. Update soon! Can't wait to see what she says.
Date: February 01, 2008 06:29 am Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Very sad so far but I am enjoying it. Hopefully there is an explanation why Jim hasn't answered.
Author's Response: Thank you! I never thought about the fact that releasing it as separate chapters would add more drama to it. I was surprised to see that you thought it was "sad", and then I realized that I wrote it all at once, so I already knew what is going to happen. So it makes sense that the story is still in a sad place at this point for the readers. Don't worry- things will work out for Jim and Pam. :o) Thanks again!
8 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2008 08:17 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
I love this take on Jim going to Stanford - instead of the anger of Pam finding that he left, we got to see the utter sadness and despair over the situation causing him to leave. Very well done. I'm anxious to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoy the different take on that situation.
Date: January 31, 2008 10:39 am Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Oh, PuffingNoise, I'm loving this (as you know). Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's always awesome when your betas review your published work even though they've alrready read it. :oD
I am still working on the last chapter and will definitely have you take another look at that when it's ready. But for now, I'm posting the first few chapoters which I am happy with. :o)
9 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2008 10:06 am Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Awww... poor Pam! (but I have a sneaking suspicion that things will eventually turn out right for her... right? yes? Puff? You're not going to leave us in the lurch, are you?) :)
I'm so happy to see this story beginning to be posted! I think you've made some fantastic improvements to it, and it's really much stronger as a result. Excellent work!
Author's Response:
Hehe how did you know? Are you psychic?
LOL thanks for reviewing even though you've already read the whole thing. :o)