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Reviewer: Strider Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2008 10:08 pm Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....

Umm...are there updates coming? I REALLY want some...

--Strider (who can now actually go to bed)

Author's Response: Updates soon! Thanks so much for your reviews!!!! We REALLY appreciate them!!

Reviewer: Strider Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2008 10:07 pm Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....

I loved the brother-to-brother talk; I think it was really important for Jim to understand what he'd put Pam through (though I still want her to understand the same thing!). I lov ehow Pam's becoming more confident, learning more about herself, but still loves Jim.

--Strider

Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews!!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2008 09:46 am Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....

“Yup…I am a regular Matt Foley…living in a van down by the river.”   A+ for the Chris Farley reference--love it : )  Really good chapter.

Reviewer: IzzyEmme Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2008 11:18 pm Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....

This story continues to draw me in! I get super excited when I see an update! Is Jim going to come to New York to see Fancy New New York-Style Pam? Maybe her new sophistication will surpass Karen's?

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2008 10:56 pm Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....

I'm just going to take some time to say...I love this story! It is great how Pam is going out and doing things on her own and I love how Jim emailed her...I can't wait till you update with Jim's response.

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