Date: April 28, 2008 10:37 am Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
First time reviewer here. I'm loving the story, and loved the huge progress they've made in their relationship lately.
One thing with this latest chapter, though. There are references to Jon/Jonathan and Jake in this chapter, so Jim's brother seems to be a bit inconsistent!
Author's Response: thanks for the review and catching our mistake!
9 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2008 06:03 am Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
I think this dynamic of Jim's family being skeptical of Pam is very interesting. I get it but at the same time come on, how could you not just love Pam? Anyway, this story is very sweet and one I'm always happy to see. I sense a little angst coming but i'm willing to follow you wherever this story goes. Nice work!
Author's Response: thanks for your review! You'll see how Jim's family reacts next chapter!
Date: April 27, 2008 01:53 am Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
Who won the Super Mario? :P Great chapter - very sweet and intense.
Author's Response: hmm...let's say Pam won! Thanks for the reviewing/reading!
Date: April 26, 2008 07:56 pm Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
Another fantastic chapter, I love this story...you keep me coming back for more!
Author's Response: thanks for reading! We love your story!
Date: April 26, 2008 07:10 pm Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
aww soooo goood....loved it all...loved that she expected that he would be like Roy but he is sweet instead...can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing!