1 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2019 10:02 am Title: Epilogue
This is delightful and fun. The OCs are good but don't take over the story too much (and were necessary in context too, which helps). I was worried you'd have the jobs or Jake be too much for them and linger it out, but I'm very glad you did what you did. Thanks for writing it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2009 02:16 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow. Just wow. There's so much to love about this story now that I finished that I don't even know where to begin. First off, wonderful ending. The way everything came together, how all of their plans worked out, it was such a perfect ending. I loved their time together back in Scranton and how after waiting all this time, they finally are truly together. Your writing of their lovemaking was very good as well as their thoughts of that momentous event afterward.
I like how protective Jim's brother was of him and didn't immediately warmed up to the idea of Jim and Pam together. It's very realistic to feel that way about someone who have the power to hurt your siblings. But I'm even more glad when Jake came around and was happy for them. The Halpert parents are great, liking Pam because she makes Jim happy.
Love the way both of you created how Jim got the job and Pam deciding to move with him. It was perfect the way they talked it out and realized that as long as they have each other, it'll be find no matter the location. I truly love this story.
Overall, excellent, excellent job! And thank you so very much for writing this wonderful story.
Date: July 11, 2008 07:13 am Title: Epilogue
I am so sad to see this one end. It was a wonderful ride from start to fininsh. I will definitely be reading it again and again. Thank you for all your time and effort.
Author's Response: Thank you so much KHand! That really means a lot! We are so glad that you liked it and thanks for reading!!