Date: February 18, 2008 11:10 am Title: Time For A Fresh Start...
great chapter. I love that Pam is taking charge of her own life.
8 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 11:06 am Title: Time For A Fresh Start...
Really good. I feel so sad for poor Pam : ( I look forward to seeing where this is heading.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! More to come soon!!
Date: February 17, 2008 08:26 pm Title: Prologue
I love it. I'm really excited to see how Jim handles it when Pam leaves.
Date: February 17, 2008 08:03 pm Title: Prologue
Yay! Can't wait to see where the rest of this goes. And the wedding was May 10. And i liked it. and that's all i can say, really.
Date: February 17, 2008 06:19 pm Title: Prologue
Brava on your freshman effort, Elly! No need to be nervous - you've made me all sad like the merger, which is clearly a good thing.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review but I couldn't have done it without Skeber and her wonderful input! She is the talented one! But thanks for reviewing!
Date: February 17, 2008 04:03 pm Title: Prologue
Glad you figured it out!
Okay, already, one paragraph in and I am caught up in Pam's excitment. There was so much hope that day of the Merger. And then Karen had to go screw it all up.
Oh Jim. You may think nothing has changed, but it has. Pam changed. She is single. She is FNB. She wants you! And that is all!
So sad. I think you captured that day really well, and now I just wanna go ive Pam a hug and tell her it will be okay.
Date: February 17, 2008 03:29 pm Title: Prologue
I'm looking forward to more - and hopefully some fluffy happiness after all this angst! This was a good summary of that horrible, painful, episode. I'm sorry to say it brought it all back to me in almost too much detail. ;-)
Keep writing!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2008 03:06 pm Title: Prologue
Love the premise...I like independent Pam, which of course brings her and Jim together (right?!). Looking forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Maybe they end up together, I'm not so sure. Who knows? Pam could meet someone new in New York! Thanks for reading!
Date: February 17, 2008 02:15 pm Title: Prologue
Oh i LOVE this. Pam being independent would be such a welcome change. Even if it is a bit out of character according to some. I hope that Pam would speak up and claim what is rightfully hers if she had another chance!
Date: February 17, 2008 02:12 pm Title: Prologue
Really enjoyed the first chapter. Looking forward to where this is going.
Author's Response: Thanks!! Next chapter should be up soon!!