10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 09:46 am Title: Night
Okay, the two of them on the stoop... my new favorite image of them EVER
Author's Response:
Thanks! I like picturing them just about anywhere, as long as they are happy!
Date: February 19, 2008 10:59 am Title: Night
One thing that I really appreciate is how thoroughly you work the prompts into the story. It's not just a lost grocery list, Pam looking at the sky, or powering down for the night. You really explore all the possible meanings for them and ramifications.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! With the exception of the horrible "entourage" chapter (which I think improved on re-writes but was still a pain), I did try to slip the word in as much as possible beyond whatever my immediate idea was for that section. Sort of to subliminally reinforce the idea, I guess.
Date: February 19, 2008 04:48 am Title: Night
That's so nice!
For some reason, your list in the first sentence seems very poetic -- it just flows so nicely, I guess. A TWHS for "she was inexhaustible." Jim's explanation of the day vs. the night for him in Stamford was really good.
Author's Response: Thank you! Poor Jim had a hard few weeks in Stamford, I think.