Reviews For Fading smiles
Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2008 07:16 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
Date: February 29, 2008 07:16 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
great job...it has gotten better each time...i can't wait for more...love it
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I'll have a beta reader before I upload the next chapter. So I hope there won't be ANY grammar errors next time. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! :D
Reviewer: NanReg Signed 
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Date: February 29, 2008 06:53 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
8 [Report This]Date: February 29, 2008 06:53 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
So sweet. What a nice surprise.
Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2008 05:24 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
Date: February 29, 2008 05:24 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
Hey! I like this story and where it seems to be going! I have a few suggestions though, they are mostly grammer.
If you would like me to beta for you a bit to where i could point out some suggestions before you post them, then just email me at rawrrxxmattie@aim.com