Date: May 16, 2008 07:35 am Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
Hoiiii :D
Wat een vet koel dope leip supervet verhaaltje ! :P
I just cán't wait til the next chapter haha ^^
Ik hoop dat je ook mijn review VERY appreciate muwhahwaha
Groetjes Dé :P HAAH
Author's Response: Ok je bent gek! Maar ja, toch bedankt, ik apprecieer het heel erg ;) Is er niet ook een forum of zo, bij jou rs gebeuren? Lijkt me wel lachen, haha. rnThank you!
Date: April 23, 2008 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
so good...love that they don't move at the end...who were they hiding from??
Author's Response: Aah, maybe you'll find out! I'm so glad you liked it, your reviews are great!
Date: April 23, 2008 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
Great job on fixing what i suggested! What i told you about using second person is tough, isn't it? Personally, I hate that rule, but it's only for the better! Haha! I'm looking forward to the next bit!
Author's Response: Yeah, the thing is, in Dutch it's quite common. So whenever i write dutch stories, i can use the second person. So I'm really glad you pointed that out! Thanks again for your help (i really appreciate it, a lot!)and i'll send you the next chapter as soon as possible!
Date: April 23, 2008 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
Bring on the next chapter! Great!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll be working on it!
Date: April 23, 2008 07:59 am Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
Hate it???? You kidding?? I love this!! The alone at the zoo thing - really heady, love it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! That's great to hear! I'm really glad you liked it. I'm going to post the next chapter as soon as possible. Should be fun :)rnAnyway, thanks again, your review made me very happy!