10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please tell me you're going to update again today. I'll give you a million Schrute Bucks if you do. :)
Author's Response: You owe me a million Schrute bucks (or about .0003 cents)! Enjoy chapter two! (It's not nearly as enjoyable as chapter 1 . . . but every rose has its thorns).
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I read this at work this morning and it was a great way to start the day! I love the memories that come from making the bed and I love that their first time was in Jim's bed - I don't know why. GREAT shocker at the end - was NOT expecting that!
Date: March 04, 2008 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow -- great job of painting the picture of how Pam could know rationally, that should shouldn't be mad at Jim about, but yet, how it could stir up such wretched feelings that she can't put out of her mind. I think I'd feel the same way in her shoes. Actually, I think I'd throw up first, but then yeah, I'd get out of there too.
Sounds like they need to build a foundation so they can get to a point where Jim can be dragged off to Utica and Pam can joke about it. (But still be a little jealous).
Date: March 04, 2008 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOSH ! that was an INSANE twist ! wow... I'm seriously speechless ! WOW
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
What happened!! I was lost in this crazy world of JAM sexage and then out fell a pair of lime green panties! But, like another reviewer said, bonus points for including not only a pair of green panties but also a ginormous cucumber in the story. Bravo!
More smut, pleeease!
Date: March 04, 2008 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Writing sexage like this that's in character, emotionally charged and still hot ain't easy. Perfect blend of their humor and heat and great dialogue too - too many wonderful lines to list but I thought it was somehow especially touching when he responds with a simple 'good' to her ILY. And this could sum up S3: It was like she was having dinner with a stranger who sounded an awful lot like Jim. Hee!
Okay, the green-eyed panty monster doesn't scare me; bring it on ;-)
Author's Response: HUGE compliment coming from you, the queen of steam. Thank you, thank you, thank you!rnrnOh, the monster is coming . . . but luckily it doesn't stick around for long ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
seriously???? that's just mean!
haha, oh man. was not expecting that. this was so good! cannot wait for more!
Date: March 04, 2008 09:21 am Title: Chapter 1
OH MAN!!!! You got me good, wendolf! I so love this story--upcoming angst and all. Sincerely, it was such a delicious read, I couldn't even begin to tell you everything I love about it. You are now officially one of my favorite authors. I hope you can update soon. I'd hate to lose the mood.
9 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, I'll defo be reading this to completion - draws you in instataniously.
Good job, I'm looking forward to the next installment!
Date: March 04, 2008 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Wowie, wow, wow! What a great job - you had me breathing a bit heavy and then you stopped my heart with one little piece of fabric!
No matter how rational you are, it is always a little jarring to mistakenly come across something intimate from your sig/oth's previous relationship. A photo of the two laughing or kissing, a danty garment, a love note ... it can definitly gnaw at your emotions a bit.
I'm super excited to see where you are going with this one! :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I was having such a great time reading this *hot* story and then you had to go and pull the rug out from under me!!! You need to update soon!
Date: March 04, 2008 06:45 am Title: Chapter 1
No -- not those damn green panties! ARRRGGGH!
You know if you give us angst, you have to give us another dose of smut.
P.S. You have been awarded a special achievement Dundie for gratuitous use of a cucumber in fanfic.
Author's Response: Oh, more smut is coming, to be sure ;-)rnrnAnd thank you, thank you for the Dundie. I'd like to thank my husband, who is my inspiration for cucumber jokes . . .
Date: March 04, 2008 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh SNAP! You're awesome. Although technically, Pam can't really be too pissed. Karen and Jim were dating, and I'm sure she knew they were probably gettin it on. Definitely looking forward to more.
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Now THAT'S a way to start a story! :) Whew. So sexy. I loved it. Your description of Jim in jeans? So hot. I wouldn't have been able to resist him, either.
Love the twist with the lime green panties. I can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 04:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God! This was positively sizzling. Best story I've read in a long time! And the end was absolutely unexpected. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Date: March 04, 2008 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I was reading this on my phone and I didn't see the end. Oh my goodness!!!!!! Awesome beginning but now I'm a little sad for Pam. And for me. I don't want to think about Karen's underwear. More soon please.
Date: March 03, 2008 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! Talk about unexpected, but I loved it anyways. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: March 03, 2008 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy Cow! What an incredibly unexpected ending! I can see the Ghost of Karen being a force to be reckoned with, perhaps? Cannot wait to see where you go with this!!! Put more up soon!
8 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2008 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, wendolf! You certainly drop in a surprise there at the ending (TWSS)! I'm intrigued; I always thought of Karen as a non-threat after "The Job" (as though the last 3 minutes of that ep were the Anti-Karen Vaccine I'd waited a whole season to discover), but you've created a degree of tension that's very original. I can't wait to see what's next! -CH
Author's Response: Glad you're intrigued . . . I don't see actual Karen as much of a threat either, but the memory of Karen could bring up some baggage, eh? We'll see.....rnrnThanks for your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2008 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was great awesome. So was not expecting the last sentence though!!!!
Author's Response: Whoops. Meant to respond and instead posted a review of my own story! Anyways...rnrnForgot to mention that more is coming . . . of the conflict/angst variety ;-) Thanks for commenting and stay tuned!