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Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2008 04:33 am Title: Chapter 5

very good chapter! i loved it!

just one thing: Jim Carrey and Steve Carell were recently in Horton Hears a Who and you said they were going to see The Game Plan. I just wanted to point that out. OTherwise, it was AWESOME and I'm looking forward to the next chcapter? 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I am going to change that now. I originally had it has Horton, but then remembered that this chapter takes place in October.

I'm glad you are liking this. 

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

this is really great, i'm really enjoying it.

Reviewer: GoIrish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

Super cute! I really like how the focus on the kids has lessened the angst level of the usual Pam-Jim situation. It's more of an exciting feeling now rather than apprehension.

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