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Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2008 07:14 am Title: Chapter 6

That chapter was excellent! Great job! Each sentence you have written is brilliant and there is never a dull moment in your writing. Fantastic job; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you are liking the story and that you enjoyed this chapter. I had a hard time trying to get some of the sadness and fear in there.

Hopefully chapter 8 will be up soon. 

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2008 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

very nice...getting really good.

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