Date: April 08, 2008 08:08 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
I read the entire at work, thank you for bringing joy to my dreary day.
I love it. Love it! Love the banter and dialogue between the two. And I love the touching and kissing. I am looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: I’m prefacing all my review responses today with: sorry I’m so darn slow . . . I will be faster in the future, I promise. Now -- glad I could bring you joy, Alamos! Hope you liked the whole story. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: April 08, 2008 09:16 am Title: Overwhelmed
Wow. This story just keeps getting better. And not one but two smutty chapters. Delicious. Thanks for this!
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2008 10:00 pm Title: Overwhelmed
He smiled and kissed her forehead, her cheekbone and when she closed her eyes to enjoy the sensation, he kissed her eyelid.
It did,” his mouth was on her ear now, his lips brushing her lobe. “This is by far the best part of my vacation.”
“God, Pam—“ he said quietly, but then she started to move, cutting him off mid-thought.
These are a few of my favorite things. You just keep on amazing me. I'm pretty much out of words, but I'm so glad you aren't.
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2008 09:24 pm Title: Overwhelmed
I LOVE that Pam made PB&J sandwich! :D I'm sad this is wrapping up. But it has been a very satisfying ride so far (TWSS).
Date: April 07, 2008 06:41 pm Title: Overwhelmed
I just discovered this story today -- read it all in one sitting -- and it was awesome! I loved your take on Pam's interrupting the ceremony (and Roy asking Jim to talk to her!) Loved Jim & the Arby's in the honeymoon suite. Loved him STILL going to Australia, giving Pam the space to get herself (and her apt. together) but not before leaving her with a super hot kiss before he left. And I loved her attacking him as soon as he came back. Now my main thought is (ridiculously enough) that Pam has got to buy herself a couch! Like I said, ridiculous.
Great story! Already added it to my favorites.
Date: April 07, 2008 06:07 pm Title: Overwhelmed
Your just killing me with these quick updates. Killing me softly that is.... ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2008 04:20 pm Title: Overwhelmed
Very hot! I've got to say this story is missing only one thing, a wendolf staple if you will. Where is my barefoot, jean-clad Jim? I hope this story doesn't end before he makes an appearance. Awesome job, I'll be sad when its over.
Date: April 07, 2008 02:02 pm Title: Overwhelmed
Excellent, wendolf, you got paid for this!!
He tasted like she probably did – like peanut butter and lust. Yummy.
Date: April 07, 2008 02:02 pm Title: Overwhelmed
That was just delicious, in a peanut-butter-and-hot-sex kind of way. The only thing that sucked was reading that chapter end note : ( I would be happy to keep reading this story indefinitely. Believe me when I say that each chapter has been better than the last.
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2008 01:52 pm Title: Overwhelmed
*whew* I knew I shouldn't have read this at work....good job!
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 11:08 pm Title: Never Like This
*sigh* You killed me in all the best ways. I've been struggling with my own Jam fic-well, the smut part. You made it lovely and HOT at the same time. Bravo.
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 09:21 pm Title: Never Like This
I love, love, love, LOVE this fic. Seriously, it's that good. The characters, the longing...just, everything. Bravo; can't wait for more!
Date: April 06, 2008 08:24 pm Title: Never Like This
Aw, chicks writing smut from the guy's pov is so cute!
Author's Response: Hee! Yeah, I'm sure it's WAY off, but this is all fantasy, remember? And if I'm gonna' write smut from Jim's POV, I get to pick the smut flavor. Fantasy always beats out reality when it comes to fic, Jimpong ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
So I had a pretty hectic day at work and came home to read not one, but two chapters of this and I am dead. I just, guh. You are amazing at words and descriptions and you seriously craft Jim and Pam in a way that leaves me breathless sometimes. Case in point: "She threw her arms around him and hugged him like he was her long lost mother or her son back from war or her best friend from college she hadn’t seen in 20 years. She hugged him tight and hard and inhaled his smell – the smell she had missed so much. He wrapped his arms around her, his hands reaching to span her rib cage on either side.
“I missed you,” she said against his neck, tears suddenly prickling her eyes.
He cleared his throat quietly. “I missed you too.”
What amazing imagery, just gorgeous.
And of course, this: "He shuddered and pushed into her one last time and she pulled him close, tight, deep. And he thought Never. It has never been like this…"
Gorgeous, just absolutely gorgeous. Another lovely, splendid job. You are far too good at this game. :)
Author's Response: I’m prefacing all my review responses today with: sorry I’m so darn slow . . . I will be faster in the future, I promise. Now -- Thanks so much for the specifics, oobadnama. I love that. Glad you liked it and hoped you like the rest of the story! Thanks, as always, for reviewing.
Date: April 06, 2008 06:22 pm Title: Never Like This
oh, my double the smut... You've had quite a productive weekend, wendolf, lucky us!
*fans self, gets some iced tea*
Date: April 06, 2008 05:13 pm Title: Never Like This
Okay. Ahem. I had to take a moment to compose myself after reading that. Then I had to read it again. :o)
Suffice it to say that this does NOT disappoint. Not at all. It's sexy and intense and stll so them. And the title chapter and last line....? Lovely.
Would it be entirely rude of me to ask when the next chapter will be posted? DEAR GOD WHEN WILL IT BE POSTED!?!?!? :o)
Date: April 06, 2008 05:11 pm Title: Homecoming
Oh, my. Deep sigh. I love so much about the things that this chapter chooses to be. I love the way you articulate how she feels in the wake of her break up with Roy, because I think it's a spot on representation. And of course I love the way you write her realization that it's the real deal with Jim -- and her hunger for him, the way she misses him. Sigh.
As for the reunion...? I think I stopped breathing when he said, "I love you." Wow.
Just love, love, love this. (Have I mentioned that I love it?)
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 03:49 pm Title: Never Like This
P.S. He shuddered and pushed into her one last time and she pulled him close, tight, deep. And he thought Never. It has never been like this…
God I love that. Beautiful.
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 03:44 pm Title: Never Like This
ohgodimsohappyithinkimgonnapassout
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Never Like This
how is everything you write freaking amazing??
another fantastic chapter. Eagerly awaiting more!!
Date: April 06, 2008 03:17 pm Title: Never Like This
I. Love. You. Guh...
I wish I could write something more coherent right now but I just can't. lol
Date: April 06, 2008 01:21 pm Title: Homecoming
I just started this story, saw there were a lot of chapters, and then I got to this one and there was no 'next' and I literally went 'WHAT?!' Update soon please.
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 12:26 pm Title: Homecoming
Meanie, leaving me hanging there at the end. :D I hope you update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 10:45 am Title: Homecoming
this story is a zillion kinds of amazing. I miss the Jam SOOOOOOOO much! I can't believe the wait is almost over! I'm glad Pam didn't beat around the bush and told Jim how she felt. I'm glad that they're about to do the deed. Its about frickin time! YAYYYY! :)
Date: April 06, 2008 09:41 am Title: Homecoming
There'd better be more, missy, or there will be hell to pay! Actually, if I know you like I think I do now, it will be worth the wait ; )
Such a warm, wonderful homecoming. Perfect. As frustrating as it was to have Jim leave for Australia, it's so very nice to have him come back to this. I'm just sitting here and grinning...and waiting...