Reviews For The Boy Next Door
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Reviewer: fightthis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2008 06:35 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun

I wish there were updates on this story. I miss it sooo much and I've re-read it like 150 times.

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2008 08:30 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

Id love to see more chapters for this!

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2008 07:18 pm Title: Bad Manners

Screw offending people lol It has a MA rating so people should know! LOVED it!

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

Please, please, PLEASE update this story! I love this story and your writing style so much! This is one of the best AU Jim/Pam stories ever! You write smut so good! Yum!

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 12:14 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

I love this story, and I really miss the updates! I'm dying to know how things play out in this AU between Jim and Pam. Please update as soon as you can. I'm not above begging...

Reviewer: stardust0607 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2008 04:42 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

Update soon please!!! I love this story so much update sooooooon!!!!

Reviewer: bee sly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2008 08:19 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

Where did you go?!?!? Please come back!! I miss this story!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2008 04:42 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

Please Update soon!!

I am so loving this smut filled story and I am missing it terribly. I hope that there is some more actual feelings/emotions revealed between the two... and of course more "sexy time". 

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 05:01 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun

I second the previous review, must have a chapter! I so love this story.

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2008 05:14 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

Heeeeeeeeey...... this is a LONG WITHDRAWAL OnlyOneKitchen! What are you trying to do to us?! It's been like, a month! COME BACK!

Reviewer: Sticious Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2008 02:42 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun

Great chapter! I love that we got to hear things from Jim's POV. I love that Jon was purposely leaving him and Pam alone the night before he left.

Looking forward to the 'dinner.' Pam totally knows that he is pretending to know how to cook just for her - classic. I am also looking forward to seeing Jon's reaction to everything.

I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2008 01:17 am Title: Pretty Pink Things

Jim's going to pass out - I'm calling it! ;) Loved his confirmations this chap that he's liked her for a long time and nice to hear that Jon knows.

"You can cook?"
Not even a little bit.
"I dabble."
Nope. Not true.
Heeee. Hee. Hee.

Reviewer: missjasadin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2008 08:01 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

love this!! can't wait for more

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2008 07:51 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

I don't know what was hotter, this chapter or the heatwave outside.  Great job.

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

thank you! i love his story, alot!

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2008 02:07 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things

BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!...they just keep coming out....BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!BABIES!

Author's Response: I don't get it :/, but thank you anyway!!

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2008 10:53 pm Title: Night Vision

Something about this version of Jim is really hot. More please!

Author's Response:

It may be the "bad boy" with a soft-side that we all love and crave...without the inevitable heartbreak of course ;)

Honestly, I stole a bit of my ex's traits and blendid them with the Jim we all know and love.

thank you for the review! 

Reviewer: Sticious Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2008 11:21 am Title: The Surface of the Sun

Words cannot describe how much I love this story! Amazing! Okay, that was a word. Can't wait until the next update :) I want to see what Pam's brother knows.

Author's Response:

Amazing is an amazing word. (I'm such a dork).

Did you find out what Pam's bro knows?

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Dundie All-Star Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 05:38 pm Title: Night Vision

I just read this twice in 24 hours. Is that bad? I really love her voice in this; the italics especially crack me up. And I really love the unique setting and how everyone is essentially themselves, except not. Basically, I am loving this, and I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: That is so not bad. That is the opposite of bad. Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I'll hopefully have another chapter up soon!

Reviewer: lahoorah Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2008 12:26 am Title: Night Vision

Wow.

 

Man, oh man. Keep this up.

 

You are an amazing writer! Please keep painting smutty pictures in my mind!

 

I'll be waiting like a little puppy at the front door at 5 PM for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

I'll be waiting like a little puppy at the front door at 5 PM for the next chapter!

Loved this! I have no idea on earth what you look like, but all I can picture is a tongue hanging out and panting...lol

Thank you :) 

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2008 08:37 pm Title: Night Vision

seriously i love this story. it is a wonderful combo of them falling in love and sex.


Author's Response:

How do you fall into sex? lol...kidding, but I could probably think of a few ways...

I love that you love this story! Keep reading! Tell your friends! :)

Thanks for reviewing 

Reviewer: BrosBeforeHoes Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2008 07:39 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun

69!!!!  *snort* Hee hee hee!!! 

 

/Kevin 

 

And its a smutty chapter to boot! Whoo! Keep cranking them out b/c the more you write, the more I am addicted to your smuttiness! 



Author's Response:

It's not easy to write smut, so I'm glad you like it! I have to give some credit to my beta, elly because she has helped me so much!

Thanks for the review! Keep reading! 

Reviewer: greysgirl Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2008 05:30 pm Title: Night Vision

so amazing!!! def keep going!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I will...

I haven't been able to update as quickly as I would like, but I promise that I will keep writing whenever I can!

Thank you for the review! 

Reviewer: thatswhatshesaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2008 01:27 pm Title: Night Vision

I'm totally addicted to this story.
Andy's Cornell-ness is perfect. ;)

Can *not* wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it! Remember: The first step to recovery is admitting that you have a problem...

thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: JamFan4000 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2008 09:43 am Title: Night Vision

I am getting attached to this story of young-adult Jim&Pam. Plus, you smut it reeeeaaaalllllllyyyyyyyy good! smile on my face all day, good! I like the way you think!(steamy, sexy, smutty, all the s words!!)Keep these life savers comming(I don't have a boyfriend now, but this is the next bst thing!)

Author's Response: Wow! Now i'm the one with the perma-smile! I'm so glad you like it... I get nervous being a first time fan fiction writer and I get really nervous writing smut! I'm such a smut lover though. Thank you so very much for the review!

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