Date: May 06, 2008 07:10 am Title: Night Vision
i normally don't like the stories that take place in times other than the present, or where the characters are not associated with present-time Dunder-Mifflin, but...THIS IS GREAT! I'm loving the story line, Jim's sincerity, the connection between Jim and Pam that is authentic...and of course, the smutty stuff is fantastic! keep it going, i'm loving it!!! great job!
Author's Response: i'm so happy you gave this story a chance! Especially since you don't like AUs... Thank you for the fantastic review!
Date: May 06, 2008 06:02 am Title: Night Vision
Let's hope Dwight wasn't listening. I love the treehouse scene.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Dwight was way too concerned with Michael to care about listening to some bumpin and grindin...
10 [Report This]Date: May 05, 2008 09:06 pm Title: Night Vision
I loved when Jim silently grabbed her hand. He's been in love with her for a while, hasn't he? ;) I need to find myself a Jim Halpert. I know this review is neither constructive or criticizing, but I'm really proud of where this is going and you should be too!
Author's Response: Elly!rnThank you! rnYou can borrow my Jim halpert if you'd like. Just be sure to return him the way you got him... Rumpled and awkward. rnAs for Jim's love for Pam... You'll find out soon enough! rnrn
Date: May 05, 2008 09:01 pm Title: Night Vision
I can't even think of much to say after this chapter. It was perfect! I'm dying to know what's coming next it's making me crazy! You can ask Elly. I've harass her for spoilers she's not giving me and it's like slow, cruel, painful torture.
Author's Response: Wow! I'm glad you liked it. You shouldn't harass elly though... I promise to keep writing and updating. rnThank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 04, 2008 08:09 pm Title: W.B.F.F.'s
i love this story.
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
keep going. :)
Author's Response:
So bossy... lol!
I've been really busy, damn real life. I promise to update VERY SOON!
Thank you for loving it and letting me know. and for yelling at me a little.
Date: May 04, 2008 06:43 pm Title: W.B.F.F.'s
Oh sooo good!! But where is the next part!?!?!? Please post more soon! I LOVE this story, I'm curious to know how the party is gonna go! Can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
The next part is with elly, my beta. I'm so glad that you love it! I promise I will give you more shortly...
Thank you so much for the review!
Date: April 30, 2008 07:12 pm Title: W.B.F.F.'s
fun chapter! can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
I'm trying I promise! Life just won't pause for Fanfiction...I keep complaining about it, but no one ever listens.
Thank you for the review!
8 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2008 01:43 am Title: The Surface of the Sun
So not offended. In fact, give me more.
I've had a smile plastered on my face a few hours after reading it. So naughty.
I love the Bees character you've created, she's like FNB but maybe FHB (Fancy Hot Beesly)
And Jim seems so sweet, I'm looking forward to more backstory on him. One of the things I really like is the first person aspect, we're left wondering what Jim is really thinking, what made him fall for Pam, etc.
Author's Response:
That's awesome! I hope I can make you smile again!
FHB it is then...
I think there will be at least one chapter of Jim telling you what is going on in that handsome head of his. I promise I will update soon...hopefully you havent given up on me yet! Thank you so much for the review!
Date: April 29, 2008 04:21 pm Title: W.B.F.F.'s
seriously this is ultra fantastic. this is what i look forward to when i see whats new here. i can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am trying to get the next chapter up... Damn life gets in the way...
Date: April 29, 2008 10:39 am Title: W.B.F.F.'s
This story is my new obsession... I'm loving it and check for updates all day long!! Keep it coming!!
Author's Response: I will have the next chapter up shortly! Keep checking! Thank you.
Date: April 29, 2008 10:28 am Title: W.B.F.F.'s
Ha, ha, ha. Oh, Michael. One fix: you've got Jim turning OFF the TV, which contradicts your porn surprise--you can just take that earlier bit out.
Author's Response: You are right! Thank you for pointing that out... After I finish chapter 8, I will go fix that. I appreciate it! Thank you!
Date: April 29, 2008 06:04 am Title: W.B.F.F.'s
Brilliant chapter. I loved her thoughts when she was talking to Jon, Jim's speech to her, and Michael was hilarious!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I loved your review!
Date: April 29, 2008 05:52 am Title: W.B.F.F.'s
Same ol' Michael oblivious to everything. :)
Author's Response: That he is! Ya gotta love him... Thank you so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 08:31 pm Title: Bad Manners
my brain just exploded from the awesomeness that was this chapter. keep going. maybe i'm addicted. oh well. what a great thing to be addicted to. love it. keep going! (:
Author's Response: So, that makes me a pusher? I'll have some more for you soon I promise! I hope you keep reading and enjoying... Thank you so much for the review.
Date: April 26, 2008 07:58 pm Title: Bad Manners
GADAMN! Hell no I didn't find it offensive. Whoa, you definitely brought the diirty and I liked it! lol So happy you updated! I like that even though they get dirty with the best of 'em, every time they are gettin to know each other more. Weither it be sexually or emotionally. I think you found a really nice balance that's cohesive, which can be hard to accomplish. Kudos to you and your wonderful chapter. When she kept bringinup the fact that she is loud it reminded me of Kellis and Nas. Nas bought Kellis(both of these are rappers in case you didn't have a clue about wtf I was talkin about) a house in the middle of nowhere that way they could be as loud as they wanted without the neighbors complaining! It popped into my head, and I could imagine Jim doing that for Pam. lol, AMAZING part!!! I'm so excited when I see a new post for this story!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Lol! I do know who they are and I know that he did that for her. Pam may not be THAT loud but you put quite a picture in my head! Thank you so much for the awesome review!!
Date: April 26, 2008 01:13 pm Title: Bad Manners
This story is like extremely hot, I love smut, i'm a big 'ol hussie. keep it coming..as well as jim and pam ;)
Author's Response: What a coincidence! I'm also a hussie who can't get enough smut. Keep reading and I'll keep it hot! Thank you so much for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 12:08 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun
Nope. Not offended. At all.
Author's Response: Good. I'm glad! I'm working on the next chapter now, but life keeps demanding my attention.rnThank you for reading and reviewing!rn
Date: April 26, 2008 08:36 am Title: Bonnie and Clyde
This story really reminds me what it was like to be 22. I'm sure a few of us had a summer like this (I wish). Anyway, I really, really, wish I still had a backyard pool--Whew, that was so hot. Can't wait for an update to see how they struggle with the lust vs. being in love feeling that people struggle with at that age.
Author's Response: I've never had a pool, but REALLY wish that I had! I'm working on the next chapter, but life is getting in the way! Thank you so much for the review!rn
Date: April 25, 2008 12:16 pm Title: Hot Little Biddy
I'm curious about Pam's brother...I hope he didn't stumble upon last nights trist! So it seems Jim is willing to be in this for more than a month, hmmm wonder if Pam will catch on. Great chapter, Jim is too cute with being ok for either smut or chillin. I like that way about him. So happy you updated!!! Would I jinx you to say I love the quick updates and to keep 'em coming?!? Fantastic part, lokking forward to what's next!!
Author's Response: You did jinx me! Life got even busier... I blame you, but I guess the awesome review makes up for it so thank you
Date: April 25, 2008 09:49 am Title: The Surface of the Sun
Do not apologize for no smut....this was exactly what this story needed to show that Jim has always wanted to be Pam's friend and was being a typical boy and being all immature about it. I really liked this part: "K." He gives me a quick kiss as though we've been doing it for years, "see ya out there." Does that mean he's not leaving? What am I supposed to do with him?
because it showed me that Jim is already comfortable with Pam and Pam with him but then the last 2 questions show Pam's lingering apprehension over what is happening with Jim. I really liked that you added a little more story with this chapter and didn't automatically go straight to the hot monkey sex you know these two kids are gonna be having!! Hope to hear from you soon!
Author's Response:
I love that you are my beta, but still leave me a review!! And therein lies the true essence of elly's character.
You rock my being! Thank you so much
Date: April 25, 2008 07:31 am Title: Hot Little Biddy
you are good with the writin'... & the sexin'!
Author's Response:
How do you know that I'm good at the "sexin?" Have we met?
I kid I kid. Thank you so much!
Date: April 25, 2008 07:04 am Title: The Surface of the Sun
The folks over at NorthernAttack and myself are truly loving this story! It's pretty freaking fantastic. This story is so not anything like my teenage/ early twenties years.
Author's Response: Elly had to explain to me what northern attack is... As a first time fan fiction writer that is just so cool!rnrnCan I ask what criticisms you all may have? I really don't know what is acceptable, etc. I only know what I like and hope some other people will as well rnrnThank you!
9 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2008 01:34 am Title: Hot Little Biddy
Oh, this was so fun I didn't even mind not having the smut! But I still want more, mind you! ;)
Author's Response: And you shall receive more... I'm glad you liked it and took the time to say so!
Date: April 25, 2008 12:46 am Title: Hot Little Biddy
No need to apologise because this was super cute - I love how the two of them are getting closer... great chapter!
Author's Response: Okay I take it back. Just kidding... rnrnThanx for the review!
Date: April 24, 2008 10:36 pm Title: Hot Little Biddy
Wow, three chapters in one day! Love the scene of the two cuddling up for a nap. And damn I almost got shower sex, there is not enough shower sex in fandom! Why is that? I love the turn around Jim has made from being the 22 year old jerk to the 22 year old trapped in a 12 year olds body and punching the girl he likes on the arm.
And holy moley with the sex, wow! And they have a month together! There may be shower sex yet! Woohoo!
Thanks for the fun read!
Author's Response: I agree about the shower sex... They do have a month...rnrnJim had to get her attention somehow! Punching her in the arm seemed to be the only way. rnrnThank you! It was a fun review