Reviews For The Internship
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Reviewer: missjasadin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2008 09:47 pm Title: Name

noah is my favourite name.
dont you fire jim! promote him!!

Reviewer: jimandpaminlove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Proud

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Please write more soon!

Author's Response: Well...considering you're my only review for this chapter, I may have to delay writing more. Maybe I'll write it and send it directly to YOU, so no one else can see it! Ha! Take that, non-reviewers!

Reviewer: jimandpaminlove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2008 09:17 pm Title: The Date

WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE. I've read this so many times today! I love it!

Reviewer: jimandpaminlove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2008 07:26 pm Title: First Day

This is awesome! PLEASE keep writing!

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2008 03:32 pm Title: The Date

Hmm....I miss LAX....
Abrupt end? Seriously? Are you trying to kill me?

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2008 12:06 pm Title: The Job

Yay- he's going to be a sportswriter! I really liked this chapter and how it showed them really together as a family unit. Making the decisions and wanting the same things. Well written, I love the chapter, too! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2008 11:57 am Title: The Job

I love that we're learning more about their lives together. Really great chapter.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2008 06:29 am Title: The Job

You should be pleased. Very well done. I'm really enjoying this story. It's well written and believable as a possible future for Jim and Pam. Simple, happy, magical.

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2008 08:12 am Title: 3am

Very cute chapter, Jackson is totally adorable, exactly as I imagine any child of Jim and Pam... please update soon- I still want to know more about this internship that Jim is struggling so much with!!!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2008 06:13 am Title: First Day

Boy, I think Pam needs to take a weekend visit to see Jim.  Very cute update.

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2008 05:33 pm Title: First Day

Why did we have to miss out on most of their conversation? I would have loved that!

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2008 04:23 pm Title: I Miss You

Another cute one- I'm really loving this story, please continue!!!

Reviewer: Ruby Caspar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2008 04:06 pm Title: I Miss You

Jackson is too ridiculously cute. And I love this story. Please do continue!

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2008 03:57 pm Title: I Miss You

Please keep going it's a good story.

B

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2008 03:47 pm Title: First Day

Please keep going with this story.  I really like it.  I need you to see it through to Jim coming home!

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2008 08:21 pm Title: Jackson

Why was Pam crying?

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2008 07:52 pm Title: Jackson

Very cute... nice cliffhanger- I hope that nothings wrong though... can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: Ruby Caspar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2008 02:19 am Title: It's a....

Awwww.... the final scene was the cutest thing ever!

Reviewer: contif Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 09:03 pm Title: It's a....

Hey! Great job with this story!

I absolutely LOVE that the Halperts are getting another addition to the family :)

I can't wait to read what's next for them... Keep the updates coming - you are doing a spectacular job!

Reviewer: BrosBeforeHoes Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 08:38 pm Title: First Day

Nice :)

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 08:22 pm Title: It's a....

So cute. I can see this in their future. They seem like the couple that will never get tired of each other and be sad when they are apart. Jim should stay at the intership but he will really start to miss his family. :)

 

Yay!! Less then 24 hours till The Office.  :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 07:54 pm Title: First Day

I'm sorry I forgot to tell you last chapter how much I love this.  Just how I hope Jim and Pam to be.

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 07:18 pm Title: It's a....

Great chapter, I have many questions which means you really need to continue... I love married Pam and Jim and Jackson sounds like a character- would love to see more of him.

Update soon.

Author's Response: Sooo...what questions do you have? I'm really curious. I'd like to know, and maybe I can build a few chapters off of them.

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 07:13 pm Title: It's a....

It's really sweet. I'm waiting for more.

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 06:48 pm Title: First Day

Really cute! I love Halpert family stories. Keep em coming1

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