Date: February 03, 2022 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such a sweet story!
1 [Report This]Date: March 26, 2021 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww. I loved this. And it's definitely a close cousin of the canon proposal, so kudos there.
Date: April 28, 2008 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this...it's so beautiful in its simplicity. This is such a Jim/Pam proposal because it's not anything extravagant but still perfect. I loved the telepathy line...true Jim Halpert indeed.
Date: April 28, 2008 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful job. And so them, volumes being said without a word. Love it. Can't wait for their smiles when the real thing happens.
10 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2008 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely gorgeous. I haven't been able to close this tab on my browser ever since I opened it two days ago - I keep coming back to it and reading it over.
I adore the way you've written this, with the perfect repetitions, descriptions; it's wonderfully in-character, and the little paragraphs you have of their initial settling into things - her laughing, his not having to ask anymore - just - beautiful. Realistic and perfect.
And I am grinning enormously. :D I have to read this again now. I probably won't close this for another week or so. ;)
First fic! Insanity. You are brilliant.
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
This left me with a giant smile on my face after a pretty hectic day at work. So thank you for that. This was really perfect and sweet and uh, SO them and I find it hard to believe this was your first piece. So lovely, and hopefully we can read more from you soon. Welcome to the madness, it gets pretty addicting. :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Really great job, Tea Time! Congrats on your first fic!
Date: April 26, 2008 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1
GUH.
...thats the sound of me dying.
Oh, this was so completely perfect. An amazing first fic. Welcome to it! :o)
Date: April 26, 2008 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw... just - aw... Wow, that was so incredibly sweet.
Date: April 26, 2008 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Seriously this is your first fic? Unbelievable. It's brilliant, seriously. I loved this.
Date: April 26, 2008 07:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Love this! And I hope to see much more of you! I really liked the structure you've got going on--it flows so well with your main point! Awesome job!
Date: April 26, 2008 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, lovely, lovely. I especially liked: "So when he’s sitting on her couch Tuesday evening, watching her attempt make a beer can chicken with an electric skillet on top of her stove, he just sort of smiles and unfolds himself from the couch, grabbing the little black box out of the messenger bag sitting by the front door."
So evocative, and realistic.
Date: April 26, 2008 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Really beautiful. Your writing is very descriptive and affective, and I loved the way you envisioned the proposal. I hope it's a lot like this!
--Strider
Date: April 26, 2008 04:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! A perfect proposal! And even banter at the end. Perfect for JAM.
8 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 01:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I obviously keep thinking about how this will go down, and I am definitely leaning toward private, simple, with a touch of mischievous Jim.
I adore your image of the proposal. It's cute, but not cutesy, it has a creative touch with the end line, Pam is happy, which is a must, really, and it left me satisfied and smiling. :)
Great job!
Date: April 26, 2008 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so great! I loved it! Nice job!!