Date: May 29, 2008 07:58 am Title: Dinner Time
i am absolutely enjoying this story! i check back every day to see if you update it, and im happy to see it being updated it fairly quickly. i love the personal touches you put on the wedding, their my favorite part. the jelly beans, the ham sandwiches...awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I enjoy the personal touches too; I imagine their wedding would be full of them because they are both so sentimental. The next chapter is my favorite, so be on the lookout for it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Dinner Time
MAWWAGE!
I... sort of? loved Michael's speech. Loved Jim's vows more. =] My favorite part, I would have to say, was Pam explaining her something old, her something new, her something borrowed, & her something blue. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't give up on this story!
Author's Response: I know nothing can beat his speech in Phyllis' Wedding, but at least I gave it the ol' college try. I love that the 'something old, something new' explanation was your favorite part! If you liked the yogurt lid reference, you will definitely enjoy some things in the next chapter. Don't worry, I ain't givin' up yet!
Date: May 28, 2008 04:31 pm Title: Dinner Time
your story is one I constantly check up on since it just seems so real! I love how you got Michael's speech to be cringe worthy but not so much that I want to run and hide. Also I have to add that you have the best JAM moments since you stay true to the characters and their quirks instead of just going off and seeming to reinvent them. Please keep up this work! I love love love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Yeah the fact that I wrote it in episode style I think really helped me keep everyone in-character, and so I'm glad you think that decision paid off! The next chapter is my favorite, so be on the lookout for it soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 04:05 pm Title: Dinner Time
Loved it! So right on for the office personalities. Stanley and the crossword puzzle: brilliant! I know it's disapointing not to get reviews. This is a really good in character piece of fan fiction. Don't be dismayed I loved it and I'm sure so many others did as well. I wrote one (After the fireworks, in progress) if you care to read it and leave feedback for me I'd appreciate it.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's encouraging to hear, cause I got a lot more reviews for this story on the other site I post on. I will definitely go and read your story! I'm still trying to sift my way through the most popular stories on this site, but I should remember to also check out ones written by my own reviewers! *Smacks forehead* Thanks again; glad you're enjoying it!