Date: May 14, 2008 04:57 am Title: Chapter 3
i've been reading this since you started but haven't had a chance to review until now. this story is really well-written and i love it! you know how to grasp this subject very well along with the Jim & Pam characters. but i can't imagine how stressful this would be to Jim! I love how he went to Pam for advice and it's making things good between them. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: I like your stories too, thanks! I've never had to deal with this subject personally, but I think it makes for an interesting story. Glad you like it!
Date: May 13, 2008 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
You're moving at quite a clip, iwantphillyjim! I know I certainly appreciate quick updates, and I know it must not be easy. You've got an interesting concept here, and I'm interested in its progression. If I may offer a little helpful advice, I think you would really benefit from a beta. If you click on MTT's home page, there are links that direct you to the gods and goddesses who help bring us all the great stories that we enjoy so much. Please know that I don't mean to put you down. I think your enthusiasm is awesome, and I'd love to see more from you. I just think a beta would make a good story even better! Keep up the good work : )
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a beta now, Elly ROX! hope you continue to enjoy reading, I love this story right now.
Date: May 13, 2008 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
You've got me hooked with this story. Every 20-somethings nightmare. I hope this Lisa chick doesn't make a play for Jim once the get in such tight quarters. He seems so vulnerable in your story that he might just fall for it. Pam better stake her ground fast!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review, sorry I took forever to respond. I'm glad you like it. Keep reading, it gets interesting my next 2 chaps are nearly done.