8 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2008 06:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow! Just read the last two chapters, iwantphillyjim. What a whirlwind of activity! Really good job. I was swept up in the action!
Author's Response: Thank you! and thanks for reading, hope you enjoy the new chapter, less action, but hopefully it satisfies.
Date: June 01, 2008 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh my god.(jaw drops)That is just mean.
but on the other hand. It looks like now it's just Jim and Pam and a baby...
Author's Response: Please, pick up the jaw, it won't be so bad next chapter, or will it? Hmm.. I wonder. Thanks for reading!
Date: June 01, 2008 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh no, poor Lisa! And poor Jim! Woow, you've created a hell of a situation here. I mean, don't get me wrong, I really love this story and your writing's really good, but what are they going to do?! I hope you'll update soon, because inspite of the dramatic contents, I'm really enjoying this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and your review, I'm glad you like it, it is quite the pickle they're in. But come on, sometimes angst is just fun...I promise it will bring good things.
Date: June 01, 2008 11:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow. I wonder if Jim will blame himself for Lisa's death? This is a very compelling story. Looking forward to your next update. :)
Author's Response: Hey thanks for reading, I don't think Jim will feel responsible, we'll just have to see.