Date: July 11, 2008 11:44 am Title: Tuna!
You already know that I adore this, but I suppose I should reiterate it here. I thought that the rooftop was the absolute perfect place for the proposal, and you managed to pull it off without hitting us over the head with meta cliches. Until I'm potentially proven wrong in September, this is the route that I choose to believe that Jim and Pam chose after GT.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I just had a hard time believing that Pam would let that night go without saying something to Jim. They haven't gotten this far by falling back into their old pattern of not talking about things.
Glad you liked it! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2008 09:49 am Title: Tuna!
And that is what happened. Let's just leave it at that!
Another great story! Loved it!!
Author's Response: Thanks, jinx - I just hope those two kids are happy come the start of S5!
Date: May 20, 2008 10:31 am Title: Tuna!
Oooh, Creepy Toby. I hadn't expected that. I love how Pam sucked up her disappointment to give Jim to boost of encouragement he obviously needed.
Author's Response: I remember reading this review - I can't believe I missed replying! I think one of the elements of Jim & Pam's relationship that strikes me as so true is how they do tend to overlook their own misery if it helps the other person. Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 07:08 am Title: Tuna!
Oh please, please, please, write more. I'm practically begging. ;)
This is gooood. The season finale was... good, except for that one tiny little fact that is.. JAM. :( scratch the "tiny little", ha ha.
This seems like it'd end a lot better than the season finale did on the JAM front, and I cannot wait for more because.. how am I supposed to survive the wait? :)
Author's Response: haha - thanks for the review, Sonni! I promise more is coming soon - most likely up by tomorrow morning!
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 04:59 am Title: Tuna!
muy fabuloso. thank you. i feel better :)
Author's Response: Awesome - feeling better was my complete intention! More soon - and thanks for being so awesome to leave a comment, chelibelle!
Date: May 17, 2008 12:20 am Title: Tuna!
ewwww....Creepy McCreepsters out in the parking lot! Goodbye Toby indeed! Can't wait for the proposal. I'm so glad you had Pam just confront him on this.
Author's Response: Yeah, I was tempted to have her say more, but I'm convinced she is really in denial about Toby. She doesn't want to believe he's being that way, you know? At least now she's free to go have some fun on the roof..... Thanks for the comments, LoveFool! More soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 09:47 pm Title: Tuna!
So...I'm just going to pretend your version happened, instead of Pam saying she found Toby cute and Jim getting his ass kicked by Andy. Can't wait for more! (You are writing more, right??)
Author's Response: Definitely writing more, honeypioneer! And I totally think my version is what happened, too. :-) Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: May 16, 2008 09:42 pm Title: Tuna!
Mox it's good to have you back! You owe us a bunch of chapters on at least 2 or 3 of your fine pieces of work! I was pissed off at Greg Daniels also and can't stand Toby at all. But I guess they need material for 30 episodes next season They just better not mess with JAM. I have a feeling that JAM is the spinoff.... Great writing as usual. Could you have Jim kick Toby's ass please.
Thanks,
The Batman
Author's Response:
Oh, Batman - you have no idea how often you sit on my shoulder and remind me there is unfinished business in Squirrel II and 12 More Days. :-) I have not forgotten, and as soon as I get moved I promise I'll get back to those. So look for some mid-summer reading. You are the best for remembering, though!
And the best way to kick Toby's ass is to get that ring on Pam's finger. So I'll see what I can do. Thanks for reviewing, as always!!
Date: May 16, 2008 09:04 pm Title: Tuna!
Oh, Moxie. I am still licking my wounds from last night. Your story is good medicine.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Good medicine = one part Jammy schmoopiness + one part vicodin. :-)
Thanks for taking the time and reviewing, Beeswax - you rock! More coming soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 08:51 pm Title: Tuna!
Once again, you knocked it out of the park, Moxie. This felt so real, much more so than the finale did. I loved how Pam's final line ties into the episode title.
Author's Response:
*blush* thanks, Larry! Hope the next chapter makes you as happy. :-)
Date: May 16, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Tuna!
Since the finale yanked my chain so hard to where I no longer care about the show, I applaud you writing what SHOULD have happened. Thank you Mox for this.
Author's Response: Anytime, realitycheck!!! Hope the bruises from the chain-yanking are starting to heal. :-)
Date: May 16, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Tuna!
I ::heart:: Moxie.
Author's Response:
Awww.... I ::heart:: awesome reviewers like Aurorabee! (adorable username!) Thanks!!!!
Date: May 16, 2008 06:52 pm Title: Tuna!
Ok, can I just say, that we should fire GD and make you the new show runner of The Office, because your take on last night, is infinitely better. I loved how you were able to convey both Jim and Pam's disappointment at the thwarted proposal, and how Pam clearly recognized why Jim was upset. I also particularly liked the part where the single tear runs down Pam's cheek and it's seeing that that causes Jim to unravel. Just perfect. Please update soon! Give the readers what they want! P.S. AWESOME title
Author's Response: You get the Dundie for most awesome fanfic reviewer! :-) I appreciate the comments, even if GD might still be slightly more qualified for the job. Maybe he'd let me sit in the corner and just feed him comments? Thanks so much!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 06:38 pm Title: Tuna!
Please tell me you're updating soon!
Author's Response: Absolutely I am! Check back tomorrow! Thanks for the comment, Ellie!
Date: May 16, 2008 05:09 pm Title: Tuna!
“Please just ask me,”
I KNOW, RIGHT! That moment as you wrote it was super sweet.
Also, your title makes me super smile.
Author's Response: Everything I said below x 2 = Thanks!!! :-)
Date: May 16, 2008 05:08 pm Title: Tuna!
“Please just ask me,”
I KNOW, RIGHT! That moment as you wrote it was super sweet.
Author's Response: Right! I couldn't get that image out of my head, so I made it a fanfic - so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing - Comments make me very happy!! Part 2 should be up tomorrow.
Date: May 16, 2008 04:46 pm Title: Tuna!
Thank you a million times over for writing this! Lovin' everything about it.
Author's Response: You are more than welcome, Post_it_Thief! I think we all needed some Jamminess to make up for being so denied! More coming soon, I think/hope! You're awesome for taking the time to review!!
Date: May 16, 2008 03:45 pm Title: Tuna!
We all WISH it happened this way...I am not feeling the love for Greg Daniels right now, ya know?!!!
Wonderfull as always-I will be waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hopefully the next chapter will be coming very soon (why does real life have to interrupt my Office life???) - Thanks so much for reviewing, JF4K - I truly appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 03:12 pm Title: Tuna!
lovin' it :) Toby went the way of Jan in my opinion - normal to creepy weird. Also, the roof has always been my ideal spot for a Jim proposal
Author's Response:
Thanks, untherapy - I don't know why Toby had to end up the way he did. All I can keep thinking about was "he used to let Jim watch Sasha and now he's trying to steal his girl?? What's up with that??!" And I totally agree about the rooftop. That's *their* place. Thanks so much for reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Tuna!
My dearest, darling Moxie. I would be much, much happier today if you were at the helm last night. Thank you for this. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: If this made you happy - then my work is done. :-) So glad you're enjoying it, Nan - more soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Tuna!
If I wish long and hard enough, can this become what actually happened?
Seriously, you're amazing mox! The finale's had me down all day, and this just made it all better. Can't wait to see how you finish it off! -Spencer
Author's Response: Just click your red shoes three times, and it will all be true. ;-) Thanks for the review, Spencer! I really love hearing from you. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 03:06 pm Title: Tuna!
Moxie!!!! Finally. Someone to get this right!!! Love you, love you, love you for doing this!!
Author's Response: How awesome are you, Stilla? VERY!! Thanks for such a sweet review - so glad you liked it! (More to come soon!)
Date: May 16, 2008 03:04 pm Title: Tuna!
I thought you were going to cheat out of a proposal (but then I checked to see this isn't finished yet, YAY!) I liked them being sweet in the back, Jim hugging her because he made he cry, Pam telling him just to do it. Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks, flamingo! I actually wasn't planning on writing anything about it, but the demons took over and wouldn't rest. :-) Part 2 should be up by tomorrow - stay tuned! Thanks for reviewing!!