10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2008 06:25 pm Title: Unleaded Love
Omg! I just came across this fic, I can't believe you guessed Jim would propose to Pam at a gas station! Great fic!
Date: July 23, 2008 07:21 pm Title: Unleaded Love
Aww, that is so sweet and happy. At first I was a bit unsure, because first person Jim just threw me off, but you handled it wonderfully. Great job. I love how they got engaged at a gas station. Never in all MY plans for how, when, they got engaged was it at a gas station on the way home.
Minor note is I fixed two problems you had with spacing. You left out a space between words in two separate areas, but I fixed them for you :)
9 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 08:54 pm Title: Unleaded Love
I really like this post "Goodbye Toby" story! I could see Jim struggling to keep conversation going on the way home. I love that he proposes at a damn gas station! My two favorite lines:
“Oh come on Halpert, I promise you’ll have a lifetimeof ass kicking opportunities ahead of you.”
and
So when the camera crew asks, we’ll come up with an elaborate and beautiful story about how I proposed to you on a moonlit beach lined with white candles. And we will say nothing about gas stations. Ever. Right?”
Date: May 17, 2008 07:19 pm Title: Unleaded Love
I love how you really captured Jim and Pam here...the dialog and the characterization was really good. Thanks for sharing!
8 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 07:09 pm Title: Unleaded Love
Ah, NOW I get the title--very clever : ) Loved this.
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 05:14 pm Title: Unleaded Love
So many great lines:
“But really, professing love for someone already in relationship after some lame office party? Weak sauce.”
“I can’t believe I’m going to propose to you at an Exxon.”
“Quit stalling,” Pam said breathlessly.
“I’m not sure I’m okay to drive,” I admitted"
Lovely, lovely fic!
Date: May 17, 2008 12:59 pm Title: Unleaded Love
“But really, professing love for someone already in a relationship after some lame office party? Weak sauce.”
Hee. Oh, Jim. This is one of my favorites of the after-Goodbye-Toby fics. I love it when people attempt to write from Jim's point of view and it comes out actually sounding like him, which I think you did very well.