10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2009 09:02 pm Title: Until they found me
okay, forget this was my favorite silly chapter yet, i loved the pet names, and the shoes in the middle of the room. it's kind of nice to have a chapter that isn't so essential to the plot just as a quick, cute filler. great job!
sorry if it was rude i called this a filler. i don't mean it in a bad way, but i'm too lazy to delete it. sorry!
Author's Response: Oh, and that's not rude at all! It was most definitely a filler...I don't work with too much plot in these little phone conversations, and this one especially was meant to be just light and easy.
Date: March 16, 2009 04:26 pm Title: Until they found me
Wow, I just read this all in one sitting for the first time and it is so lovely. Funny, sweet, well written, what a pleasure to read. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Until they found me
I absolutely love this! Another fabulous chapter that sounds just like I hope their off-screen convos go. I love that Jim practiced the "honey" and it still didn't come off right. Just pitch perfect!
Date: October 27, 2008 04:48 pm Title: Until they found me
I REALLY liked this chapter. I've played their whole terms of endearment conversation in my head, and this chapter was exactly how I thought their conversation would go. Does that even make any sense?
I'm shutting up now.
Date: October 27, 2008 08:40 am Title: Until they found me
I loved this chapter. Loved the banter back and forth about their nicknames. Great job.
Date: October 27, 2008 07:04 am Title: Until they found me
“Or they might turn out to be wild-haired midgets.” Heee :) Love this happy JAM banter! The thought of Jim practicing pet names is very cute.
Author's Response: Yay! My NanReg review arrived! Happy JAM banter makes the world go 'round. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. You're awesome. :D.
Date: October 27, 2008 07:02 am Title: Until they found me
ITA, Kestrel -- most of the pet names sound completely wrong coming from Pam & Jim. Love them fighting like an 'old married couple' already, and Jim's shoes being the size of the furniture.
Procrastinate away, dear.
Author's Response: Oh, lisahoo. It's so nice to know I'll always hear your thoughts on my little scribbles. And yes, it's always been so odd to me that such an affectionate, playful couple would be so completely unsuited for pet names. Thanks for sticking with me, love. :D.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2008 05:55 am Title: Until they found me
Just love that you made nicknames into a chapter topic! I always cringe when a story appears here with Pam & Jim calling each other sweetie, honey or baby. It does seem really out of character for them. It does make me laugh, though, to think of them trying it out.
“Oh my god, you totally practiced that didn’t you?”
Too cute. I must disagree with you on one point, though. I absolutely could see Jim calling Pam Beautiful with a straight face. I think Pam would giggle & be uncomfortable but I think it would seem perfectly appropriate to Jim.
I think you should keep this up till Pam is officially back to "regular" status, with her full allotment of screen time!
Author's Response: I know, right? It's one of the hardest problems I run into when I write stuff, so I figured I might as well use it as material. And now that I think about it, I think I probably could picture Jim using 'beautiful' - but only on very special occasions. Thanks for the review, VB! Without my weekly dose of Pam, I'm have no choice but to write about her instead :D.