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Reviewer: Wendy Blue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 06:09 pm Title: If I could open my arms and span the length of the isle of Manhattan

Well, that killed me dead.  In the absolute best way possible.  I love that song, too.  Guh.  Well done!

Author's Response: Haha, good! I'm glad you liked it! And that song is like the best song of all time. Seriously.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 04:45 pm Title: If I could open my arms and span the length of the isle of Manhattan

OMGOMGOMG!  This imperfect perfect proposal does kick my ass.  Totally.  I've been in a long-distance relationship and your week does go like that, and the drive home is endless.

Only it is three times as hard for you, because when you go home, there are more places where she is supposed to be. I have to admit, I was a bit worried at the level of angst in the beginning of this story.  I've felt that agony of missing someone so much, just like Jim.

You used to get them all the time at the beginning of your relationship and you’ve gotten over trying to one up him. Well, mostly.  Love this.  Of course Jim has a bit of a chip on his shoulder, he watched that oaf with Pam for 3 years, knowing he'd do things differently.

You rock. 



Author's Response: I rock? Awesome. You rock more. Honestly. Long distance relationships are the pits, I agree. I keep coming back to that, Jim's in Scranton and Pam's in New York and that would totally suck.rnrnI love him trying to one-up Roy, I would if I were Jim. I think it's human nature to want to out do the person before you. rnrnI'm thinking that the three OMG's mean you like it. I'm very happy you like it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 04:30 pm Title: If I could open my arms and span the length of the isle of Manhattan

Bashert, this was like a cold glass of lemonade on a sticky day : )

You like to think part of Art Student Pam’s happiness is because of you. Old Pam was Roy’s, and this Pam, this delicious, giddy, beautiful Pam is yours.   *sigh*



Author's Response: Mmm, I love lemonade! I'm taking that as a super huge compliment! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 04:27 pm Title: If I could open my arms and span the length of the isle of Manhattan

Very sweet! Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 03:52 pm Title: If I could open my arms and span the length of the isle of Manhattan

LOVE. IT.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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