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Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2008 05:39 am Title: Chapter 3

Awesome!  I loved how you wove Health Care into your story.  I also loved the end:

She smiled and waved and Jim watched her red tail lights disappear down the road, confused by the slight flutter that he felt in his chest.

*sigh*

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