Date: June 13, 2008 05:41 am Title: Motion
This is great! Please update soon.
Author's Response: drewbers,rnrnThanks! Either I'm getting this review late, or MTT isn't working entirely right... The other three chapters are posted!
Date: June 13, 2008 05:40 am Title: Motion
Really great banter! I very much enjoyed this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Very much appreciated :)
Date: June 08, 2008 05:54 pm Title: Motion
Aw! So sweet! And so totally in character! I love it! MORE please! :D
Author's Response: Thanks :) I like review-swapping with you tonight! I plan to write more tomorrow, so you shouldn't be waiting too long...
Date: June 07, 2008 06:14 pm Title: Motion
Cute! Love their banter. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's always the easy part - my bf and I talk WAY too much like J&P...
Date: June 07, 2008 11:15 am Title: Motion
I liked that it all seemed very casual and Jim didn't spend half of the chapter thinking about how he was going to propose. Good job.
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I 100% agree with you.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:45 pm Title: Motion
Very sweet. I'm excited to see that there will be more.
Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming soon, JAM with a side of Dwight.