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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 06:08 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow, that was really interesting, dms!  The ending was a real surprise to me; I just thought he must be dead, or moving in a different dimension of time or something odd like that.

I loved Dwight's comment about the Schrute brain. ;) (Although there's no apostrophe needed in "yours.")

This line is fun: "We wanted to see how you would do actually working a full 8 hour day, 40 hour week."  Hah!

Nice job, dms!  It's nice to see something different like this, too. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks TLK! :) I essentially took the TZ story line and twisted it, hopefully enough, to fit with the TO world. I didn't want it to be too outrageous, but fun instead. It's nice to see people actually read it, even if it is different.

Also thanks for the "yours" tip ;).  

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

Heh, very clever twist, DM. I always loved the TZ episodes that turned out to be some sort of weird experiment. Which, admittedly, was a lot of them. :D

Nice job! Any plans for more "episodes?" 



Author's Response:

Aw thanks! :)

Yes I have plans for more, as long as you read them I'll write them. Deal? 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Great idea for a new fic! I've always been a big fan of TZ, and I think you're on the right track here. Nice job! :D

Author's Response: Yay thanks! I always love it when you read my stuff. :)

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