8 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2008 11:23 pm Title: Anticipation
Oh, I've really enjoyed what I've read so far. I really like how you've connected all the characters, bringing in their familiar traits but in different ways. I'm so looking forward to Kelly as Ryan's date and I just loved her quick move with Jim. And, of course, i look forward to the impending date. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying this, and that you like everyone's new roles. Look for a new chapter soon!
Date: July 21, 2008 08:22 pm Title: Anticipation
Another good chapter! Looking forward to dinner & dancing.
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. Keep your eyes peeled for an update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2008 06:03 pm Title: Anticipation
Love it! I make sure to check in once in a while to see if you have a new chaper up. (translation: every day) Fan girl squee when I saw that you'd updated Philly Jam. I can't wait for the dinner date. Thanks for the new chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I'm so flattered you check every day for an update! This is definitely a motivator to get crackin on the next chapter!! And I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter as well. Thanks again!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2008 04:19 pm Title: Anticipation
Woot! I will admit, I saw this was updated and was like "wait, I didn't read a new chapter" then I remembered I did. I'm having a slow day apparently.
I can see the small differences you've changed, and they make it so great. It definitely flows a lot better :D!
Note to self: Were is different from weren't. It makes a big difference in the sentence!
And personally, I think Dorky HS Jim is extra cute. Man, now that I think about it, he looks kind of like my HS crush. I mean, different, but similar in the same dorky, way to skinny lanky sort of way. And they are both named John.... hmm...
There's gonna be a next time a next time a next time!
I just found out my girl's bridesmaids dresses are periwinkle. And of course I thought of Pam!
Whoa! It goes beyond the Kelly call! Man, that shouldn't make me as excited as it just did!
Wow. That was... perfection.
Author's Response: LOL Thank you!! Yeah I took a little time with revising. I'm glad you like it though!! Your revisions really helped; I think I redid like two paragraphs of that whole first section based on your rephrases. I'm so glad you liked the extra part at the end too! I felt like something was missing, but I was scared to put it up unbeta'ed! Again, thank you so so much!!!
Date: July 21, 2008 11:36 am Title: Anticipation
I love the "next time" part...I've had that line used on me a lot :). Loved this chapter, and can't wait for the big pay off to all this waiting I've been doing! Good work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! You've all been so patient, so I hope the next chapter will be enjoyable to you all. Look for an update soon; I'm just as excited as you are for it!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2008 08:23 am Title: Anticipation
yay Jim! Great chapter - I can't wait to watch Ryan figure out how he bit off more than he could chew with Kelly ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I am extremely excited for Ryan and Kelly in the next chapter. :D Glad you liked it!
Date: July 21, 2008 07:48 am Title: Anticipation
So excited! Oh, and lilacs--what a fine choice. Sigh. This is such fun, DA-S : )
Author's Response: Thanks NanReg! Lilacs are my fave. :) Glad you liked it!!
Date: July 21, 2008 06:46 am Title: Anticipation
You big tease! Can't wait for the next chapter, I did enjoy this and I can't wait for Kelly to meet Ryan.
Author's Response: LOL thank you. I know I'm quite the tease, but trust me, the next chapter is the big payoff. And Kelly meeting Ryan will be awesome, hands down. Thanks again for everything!