Date: August 07, 2008 12:25 am Title: The Night
I will be honest with you, I read this when you posted it and didn't leave a review because I was in a hurry and I meant to come back and tell you that it was great and that I am glad that there is no smut, oh and to please keep on going!!
I've told all of my friends about your story and they all read and want more as well as me!!!!
So if you could finish this story it would mean the world to us. Please? You are honestly a great writer and would love to see what more you create.
Thank you for reading to my ramble...Early Worm
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I definitely plan on finishing this story; I've just been on vacation this past week and haven't had time to update. I have slowly been at work on the next chapter in my downtime though, so expect an update soon! Thanks so much again for the support, and for recommending me to your friends!!
Date: July 25, 2008 09:51 am Title: The Night
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: July 25, 2008 09:30 am Title: The Night
I cannot believe I haven't commented more on this story. I love it. The date had alittle of everything. I love how you have thrown all the characters together. My imagination will run wild now with how the night progressed. Hurry back!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you like all the characters in their new roles. And the sky's the limit with how their night went! ;) Thanks so much again!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2008 08:08 am Title: The Night
*standing applause* Bravo! Very good decision to not follow them into her apartment ;-) I love this story so much - can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you approve of my decision; I am way embarrassed to write smut, so it's better to just infer. Thanks so much again!!
Date: July 25, 2008 06:41 am Title: The Night
You really know how to throw a party, DA-S! Even though your characters are AU, they're so plausible. Loving Kelly--so funny! So sweet that Pam and Jim were able to dance. Now whenever I happen to hear Harry Connick, Jr., I'll think of our favorite couple : )
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked the bit with Kelly; I feel like rich old ladies would enjoy her energy. And that's great that HC Jr. will remind you of them! He's only reminded me of Angela until now, but that has definitely changed. :) Thanks so much again!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2008 06:24 am Title: The Night
I had to force myself not to read this last night. Of course, it didn't really work because I forced my friend to read it, and then she was subsquently squeeing, which meant basically I was squeeing. And therefore, didn't really sleep. Oh well. Who needs sleep.
Oh, and now I'm also curious.... did the Sixers win without Jim's lucky charmedness there? If they lost, I don't know if I could support this relationship with a woman who makes him miss games. Haha!
Like, I know whats about to happen, and man, like, I know it, and my heart is racing and I'm so excited and holding my breath and its crazy!
oh my god. Its even better the second (third, fourth? fifth? I've lost track of how many times I've read it) time around. You totally friggin knocked it out of the park.
Author's Response: Thank you so SO much!! Psh, sleep is way overrated, especially when you're running on adrenaline from excitement!! I had lots of trouble getting to sleep as well, wondering how people were going to react to the ending. So far it's actually been a mixed bag, but overall the response has been awesome.rnrnAs for the Sixers, I don't know if I should spoil it for you, but I actually have something really funny having to do with the outcome of their game planned for chapter 8. And don't worry about Pam making him miss games either.... yeah, I think that's all I should say about that. Thanks so much again; I can't even express how grateful I am!! :D
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2008 01:11 am Title: The Night
Ok, I really REALLY wish you'd write some smut here but if you feel uncomfortable with it, I understand. Although, I must say that I have never read bad smut even when the author make those comments like "It's my first time. Sorry if it's terrible." Anyways, I'm babbling. I think you would be good at writing smut judging from your non-smut writing which btw is very good. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! sorry for the long and obnoxious review!
Author's Response: Thank you! Sadly, I have attempted smut once and was very embarrassed by it, so I never venture into that realm anymore. I know there are a lot of really good smutfics out there though (I'm not too embarrassed to read them by any means), so I just feel more comfortable directing all of you there. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter though!! Thanks so much again!!!
Date: July 24, 2008 08:41 pm Title: The Night
I love you. That was amazing. I'm on cloud nine. I want more.
Was that subtle enough?
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!! I am so glad it lived up to your expectations. Luckily the story ain't over yet missy, so there is plenty more squee-worthy moments a'comin! (Why am I talking like a country bumpkin?) Thanks so much again!!!
Date: July 24, 2008 08:24 pm Title: The Night
You are the DEVIL! Fantastic chapter...well done, just how I like it. Smutty fic's huh? I'm not good at writing the smut at all, but I do love to read it, now it looks like I may have to.
Author's Response: Thank you so much (for BOTH reviews)!!!! I can't write teh smut either, which is why I just told people to go read other, better stories with that in there. I'm SO glad you enjoyed it!!!
Date: July 24, 2008 08:16 pm Title: The Night
I think my heart was racing along with Jim's. Such a great chapter and the Dwight scenes were great. I also love how everyone adores Kelly for a change, she just needed to find the right atmosphere apparently.
Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed Dwight, and that you liked what I did with Kelly! Somehow I felt like that strangely worked. Thanks so much again!!