Reviews For Philly Jam
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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2008 12:09 pm Title: Workdays

That is so Michael, its scary!

Damn, I am sorry, how do your manage to get EVERY single characters voice down? Its like, so in characters its insane!

Jim's the right choice Pam. Dump Roy. Go with Jim.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try really hard to keep everyone in character, and having you to help point out when they're being ooc is a huge art of that. don't worry, this would not be a Jam story if she ended up with Roy in the end. ;)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2008 02:36 pm Title: Workdays

Phyllis is feisty!  Love it!  It's fun meeting each of these familiar characters in this new setting.  Nice job! 



Author's Response: Thank you! It's good to hear from you again! I'm glad you enjoyed everyone's new roles in the story.

Reviewer: Elle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2008 10:52 pm Title: Workdays

Again I have to say how much I'm enjoying this story. I love how you've split up the characters into the different Jim and Pam camps and they fit their niches perfectly. I certainly hope that Ryan gets a slapdown. I'm looking forward to reading where you go with your ideas.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think the ensemble's roles fit the story. And don't worry, I have something planned in a few chapters for Ryan. ;) Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2008 08:45 am Title: Workdays

I am happy to see Michael make an appearance, and in true Michael form he is clueless. You have done a great job of incorporating all the characters and maintaining their personalities. Especially Ryan, "Don't interrupt"



Author's Response: LOL Thank you! I'm glad you think their roles fit the setting. And I LOVE that "Don't interrupt" line (perfect for douchey Ryan), so I knew it had to be in there somewhere, hehe. Thanks again for the review!!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 06:46 pm Title: Workdays

This is a great story.  I'm such a sucker for AU stories.  It makes Jim and Pam's love story feel timeless.

This story also makes me want to visit Philly (and maybe bump into Philly Jim!)

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thank you! I agree, their love story holds no bounds. Sigh. :D And I definitely think a field trip is in order for myself and all the readers of this story. We'll dine at Monk's Cafe and go visit Philly Jim at Citizens Bank Park! Hehe. Thanks again for the review!!

Reviewer: italianfood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2008 04:13 pm Title: Workdays

I loved this chapter. Way to go Pam for taking charge of her life. I guess it only makes sense though, because this is like Pam 2.0 from the beginning with her career. So it only makes sense that she would be so in charge of her feelings for Roy and Jim.

Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't have put that better myself. I'm glad you like the angle I'm taking with her, with her being "Pam 2.0" with her job, but still being herself in her private life. Whether her reflections are put into action though, we'll just wait and see. ;) Thanks again for the review!!

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