Reviews For Philly Jam
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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2008 12:21 pm Title: Pranks and Poker

Its Casino Night.... I know this will end happy... it better end happy. Cause if not, I will so kick your ass!
But man, I still love that part of CN (and incidentally, your story).

Really. She has to see Roy? Why couldn't they ave just killed Roy instead ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I love that part of CN too, and it was great when I realized I could use it. And LOL, the suspense is just killing you, isn't it? That's totally what made s2 so fun to watch, and I'm really trying to replicate it here. Thanks for taking the time to review all the chapters all in a row! Best beta ever!!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2008 12:35 pm Title: Pranks and Poker

Awww, DA-S, it's a pleasure to help you!  Strong chapter---really fun. LOVE your Kelly.  Great how you managed to incorporate Casino Night, complete with dialog, and it worked so well.  Keep going, girl!  I can't wait for more : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, Kelly is extremely fun to write; I'm glad you like my version of her. And the Casino Night dialogue was just fun. :) Don't be surprised if I need to call on you again soon!

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2008 08:56 am Title: Pranks and Poker

I think they need to kiss.

Okay, for my own selfish satisfaction, I think they need to kiss. :)

Author's Response: LOL no worries. That's coming. :D

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2008 08:19 am Title: Pranks and Poker

I loved this chapter, Excellent. Now we just need to get rid of Kenso Roy.

Author's Response: Thanks Didi! I'm so glad you liked it; you were a huge help in putting it together. No worries, Roy is definitely in the phasing out process. :) Thanks again!

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