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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2008 10:07 am Title: When Your Wheels Stop Turning

Very nice!  I really liked Pam's thoughts in here.  It makes total sense that she'd be disappointed in herself and in him.  I loved her fleeting thought that she'd really just like to go home.

I also liked his realization of what was going on, and what he did about it. 

I hope we find out in September that something like this happened. 



Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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