Date: October 21, 2022 10:47 am Title: Chapter 15
Another remixing I enjoyed a lot but I will say I feel a little bad for Dwight. He protected Jim and got thrown under the bus to Toby the principal. Hope he doesn’t get it too much trouble. Nice to see the end result though. Jam at last.
Date: October 18, 2022 10:51 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow this must have been really hard for Pam but I love the shades of Phyllis’s wedding that this chapter gave off. Trying to make her heart feel better with Roy when she still had it bad for Jim
I get the feeling these days they no longer put on elementary school productions of Romeo and Juliet. Too much drama!
Author's Response: I would imagine not! 😄
Date: October 18, 2022 10:44 am Title: Chapter 10
So I was really sad reading the first lines of this chapter. It can be really hard when you don’t get to be in class with your friends. I remember my son going through this, shortly after we had moved and my heart broke just for him. This passage brought that to mind.
And then wow, a 4th grade/season 3 mashup. You did a good job repurposing the things like her staring at his neck, Phyllis getting married and the heartbreaking chewing gum share.
And looks like we are heading to a Roy/Pam pairing that while not the couple I want to see will make things interesting for the upcoming chapters.
Date: October 16, 2022 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
Watching the chipping away at Pam's dreams happening to a Tiny!Pam is brutal. Poor girl. Run while you still can.
Jim still a better boyfriend than Roy here. Very cute. (This reminds me - have you seen the "Day at Dunder Mifflin Elementary" Little Golden book?)
Author's Response: *googles immediately* no, how adorable is that!?
Date: October 16, 2022 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
"Mr. Scott had sent home a list of our classmates' names so our parents could ensure we didn't forget anyone. He thought everyone deserved a card no matter if we talked to them or were friends with them. Of course, his name was also on the list, and I'm pretty sure he bolded his name." This is Michael in a nutshell.
These two kids. The heart eyes. Too cute. TOO cute.
Date: October 16, 2022 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
The Dundies feels like something that a grade school audience would be very into. Also: LITTLE DWIGHT FOLLOWING AROUND MICHAEL IN THEIR SUITS.
Roy clearly struggling with what to do with his own proto-crush here. Too bad Pam is already reading books with someone else...
Date: October 16, 2022 06:40 pm Title: Introduction
First off welcome back to MTT. I wasn’t around (here) when you began this story but glad I’m here for its return. After readers this intro -how adorable is the concept and love the repurpose of the good day line.
The Angela meet scene had a great representation of her character (as a child) and Jim’s weird, halfway smile was as heartwarming here as in the show. This is going to be fun I’m sure.
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the rest <3
Date: October 16, 2022 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
I am going to have to think long and hard as to whether canon Michael might have made a good elementary school teacher. You definitely see some distinct plusses and minuses here.
Pam being a little intimidated by Katy and her continued bashful courtship of/by Jim is highly squee worthy.