10 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2008 02:29 pm Title: Sales Call
Oh, as always, just wonderful. You have a gift for the details . . . the young couple golfing in front of them, the dialogue that means so much more than the actual words said, the heartbreaking looks. I love the fics that go back in time (although they often reinforce my heartache for Jim). Great job as usual, talkative!
Author's Response: Hey, wend. Glad you liked sad little Jim. I seem to be continuing to serve as a "Philly Jim" remedy. I'm cool with that. :)
9 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2008 02:21 pm Title: Sales Call
*clap* I believe!
Count me in as one who wanted to see a golf-pencil story. This was really sweet. And this broke my heart a little:
He smiled with one side of his mouth, but there was that same sadness in his eyes. "Am I?"
Nice job, Talkative :)
Author's Response: Thank you, callisto. I actually hadn't written anything that takes place prior to "The Job," so this was a fun little adventure for me. I'm really enjoying "Spectrum," btw, so keep at it. Start making up colors if you have to.