Date: September 28, 2008 02:19 pm Title: The Dundies
I liked this last chapter best. I like the whole concept of this fic but if i were to have a criticism, it would be that each chapter has been very brief and short, maybe if they talked more about each episode and what they felt at the time or something it would be better
Date: September 08, 2008 03:17 pm Title: The Dundies
I think I'm going to enjoy revisiting these episodes with Pam & Jim's take on them!
Author's Response: honestly, that's how I'm writing these. Watching the episodes and thinking how it would be to be Pam and Jim watching it for the first time. :)
Date: September 08, 2008 07:34 am Title: The Dundies
I really enjoy stories when they go back over their times together. I'm really enjoying this one. Hurry back.
Date: September 08, 2008 06:33 am Title: The Dundies
This is a fun idea. I like it. Keep up the good work. I would love to see a longer chapter though, maybe it's coming up? ;)
Author's Response: Oh if only I had the time. :) Definitely will be working on a long chapter for Casino Night. :) Thank you for commenting!
Date: September 03, 2008 07:52 am Title: The Dundies
I love the story idea. My only suggestion is that in this chapter you could have touched on that unknown question asked by Pam in the end. Can't wait for more!
Date: September 02, 2008 06:27 pm Title: The Dundies
I like this trip down memory lane that they (and we) are taking. Looking forward to reading more.
Date: September 02, 2008 12:09 pm Title: The Dundies
I like the premise. I can see how they would watch it with trepidation. I am not sure they haven't already talked things through but I am not sure how long they have been a couple so that remains to be seen. It's good tho. I'll keep reading if you'll keep writing.
Date: September 02, 2008 11:43 am Title: The Dundies
Good Job! Hope you continue.
Date: September 02, 2008 04:36 am Title: The Dundies
Love it, love it, love it, LOVE IT. I like the idea for this story. Keep up the great work and bring me another chapter. Pronto!