8 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2008 09:25 pm Title: E-mail Surveillance
This is one of my favorite epsiodes too - and you did a great job with their reactions to watching it. I had totally forgotten about "Probably...because we're downriver from that old bread factory."
10 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2008 04:49 pm Title: E-mail Surveillance
:-) that's what the chapter made me.
9 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2008 06:26 am Title: E-mail Surveillance
Ok, here's the deal. I love this story, and I need more. These chapters are way too short. As Jim told Pam, "You need to give the people what they want!" This is such a great idea for a story and you write really well.
Author's Response: Thankyou so much for your kind review. I will attempt a longer chapter for the next one. It's going to be "Christmas Party" and as I'm sure you all know, there's plenty to write about for that episode! Might take a few days, but look for it soon!
Date: September 24, 2008 05:22 am Title: E-mail Surveillance
I loved it! Very good, yet again.
I'm a little surprised you didn't mention anything when Phyllis was like "Well, don't you mean Pam and Jim" when Pam asked her about office romanced. But it turned out good without it, so kudos!
Author's Response: Ah yeah, debated about that line. But I figure, they know what they were, how they appeared to everyone. :) Thanks for the compliments, so glad you're still enjoying!
10 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2008 12:03 am Title: E-mail Surveillance
this is such a great story! Very original - there's not a lot out there about them watching the DVD from a secure relationship space. Very strong writing - keep it up!
Author's Response: thanks!