8 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
:) I enjoy this story quite ardently. I love how Kevin and Oscar were googling childbirth. :P Crazy. This is a very well-written story--good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to have time to finish it up tomorrow.
Date: September 09, 2008 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's hard to remember sometimes just how lovely Melora really is because Jan is such a scary harpie. So I liked that detail.
Author's Response: She totally is, isn't she? But Jim's a guy- I think he probably still notices. Hee. Thank you so much for the comment; you know what it means to me (hahaha).
Date: September 09, 2008 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's a real fun premise! :) I'm glad to see you've written something new.
Author's Response: Thank you! I decided I wanted to go for something fun- my last two efforts have been more on the angsty side. Thanks for commenting, I always appreciate it.