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Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 2

I know Jim's a teenager here, but still, I can't see him overreacting that badly to Ryan. Hope they patch things up. I like the story so far :)

Author's Response: I did realize he overreacted a little too much, but really I just wanted them to have a cafeteria showdown. I tried to write him as in character as I possibly could to make this happen. I'm glad you're enjoying it though! :)

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