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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2009 09:52 pm Title: Prologue
Date: January 27, 2009 09:52 pm Title: Prologue
This is an amazing chapter. So very well writen.
And I love "I am trapped in this weird love triangle that only I know about."
Awsome job.
Reviewer: Ashley020 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2009 10:11 pm Title: Prologue
Date: January 07, 2009 10:11 pm Title: Prologue
Please continue! This is so good so far and I know it's just going to get better.
Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 03:14 pm Title: Prologue
Date: January 06, 2009 03:14 pm Title: Prologue
I'm going to applaud the same line NanReg did - the love triangle that only Jim knows about. I love that.
I also like your first person Jim, please keep writing.
Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 10:52 am Title: Prologue
Date: January 06, 2009 10:52 am Title: Prologue
Thanks for making me smile, Makemesmile (sorry--couldn't resist). Liking this idea very much. Nice to see a Jim with a sense of growing optimism.
Great line: I am trapped in this weird love triangle that only I know about. There it is. /Jim
I hope you're inspired to update soon!