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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2009 09:52 pm Title: Prologue

This is an amazing chapter. So very well writen. 

And I love "I am trapped in this weird love triangle that only I know about."  

Awsome job.

Reviewer: Ashley020 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2009 10:11 pm Title: Prologue

Please continue! This is so good so far and I know it's just going to get better.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 03:14 pm Title: Prologue

I'm going to applaud the same line NanReg did - the love triangle that only Jim knows about. I love that.

I also like your first person Jim, please keep writing.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 10:52 am Title: Prologue

Thanks for making me smile, Makemesmile (sorry--couldn't resist).  Liking this idea very much.  Nice to see a Jim with a sense of growing optimism. 

Great line:  I am trapped in this weird love triangle that only I know about.  There it is. /Jim 

I hope you're inspired to update soon!

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